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Reviews for Love Potion No. 13

By : harriet
  • From Severus1snape on November 27, 2015
    this was fun to read
    thank you
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  • From ANON - Skyie on March 01, 2011
    If this is what your early work is like, I look forward to reading the rest of your postings. *Grins* Despite some of the more amateur elements in this story, I liked it quite a bit. Though the dialogue between Harry and Ron and Hermione was kind of painful every now and then. :P On another note, I know you said that there's no plot to this story, but I have to disagree to some extent. I really enjoyed watching the animagus/soulmate bond forming between Severus and Harry. Maybe I've been missing out on a whole chunk of fandom, but I've never read a fic with quite that premise. If it was yours, great work. If it wasn't, you did a wonderful job all the same. (:
    ~Skyie
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  • From ANON - ariana on June 18, 2009
    an abrupt ending but i liked the story nonetheless i love these type of stories anyways
    and if u have the fan art or r going to get it wenever could u please email it to me
    thanks
    it's ok if u can't
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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on November 11, 2008
    pretty good, but if Harry was in his sixth year when the potion exploded, he should have started his seventh after the summer vacation.
    =^-^=
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  • From ChibiDragoonrose on August 26, 2007
    This story is awesome, however i really think that the end is quite abrupt and the bed scene doesn't quite make up for the quick ending. I was quite surprised when I got to the end of chap 14 cos i was expecting some sort of, I don't know, smutty and romantic epilogue or something like mpreg. Neverthless, I really enjoyed this fic and i love the idea of bats (even though i don't have a clue about the bats' mating perspectives). Snape's description of a chubby bat makes me LOl for like 5 mins, but i don't think he looks really that bad. Well your stories are my fav and i'm gonna read more. Continue writing, k. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on August 06, 2007
    sadly the story is shorter than your other ones... cries
    but i very much enjoyed it
    and again, being the sadist i am lol
    i love a good hard slapping from snape lol
    interesting plot and loads of ice cream loving snape hehe
    oxoxo
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2007
    I really enjoy your stories, I've been reading them over the weekend. However, you really do need someone to check them for grammatical errors, as they take away from the quality of your work.
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  • From Enemywithin7 on April 28, 2007
    A most excellent story! I like their animagi forms and their interactions were grand. Wonderful work!~Sophia
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  • From Yocum1219 on February 05, 2007
    Not TOTAL crap, but yes, you've written better. :) Friended you on LJ. Just FYI.
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  • From ANON - Luie on January 27, 2007
    that was a gooood story....wont it be nice to write a sequel?
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  • From itsallgood on January 24, 2007
    Ooh, not bad, not bad. I was expecting a full out all the way sex scene though and the ending was like "say what?" Overally pretty good. :D
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  • From ANON - Mino on January 10, 2007
    Hey I remember this story, I never thought you'd even finish it lol.
    Well I still thought it was good.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 01, 2006
    This was fun! I do like Snape in this (as I do in all of your fanfics) and Harry... Like you said the end was a little... well unfinished? It felt like you grew tired of the story and desided to end it almost where it started. I think you could do better :P Not that this was bad in any way but reading your other stories I know what you can do. If you ever think about updating it I think a couple more chapters is all that it takes and it will be wonderful... it already is sure but how could you skip the first time they had sex? Now that is just cruel :P *hugs*
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix69 on November 08, 2006
    I actually liked this...Well all but the sudden ending :P but I usually dont like endings of stories, as I tend to want them to go on forever. I love the idea of Harry as a bat, its just great :D as well as Severus...I also like Severus' personality in this fic of yours (as with all of them)...And the threat to Charlie was good..hmms Have to go find a Harry/Charlie fic now *snorts*...Thanks for posting this :)
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  • From ANON - MistressofDisaster on October 12, 2006
    Sorry but I can't agree with you!
    This story is far from bad it's a great read really!
    I loved it and if you say your other atories are much better you can be sure as hell the only thing I'll be doing for the next few weeks in my spare time is reading them!
    Great work!
    *hugs*
    MD
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