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Reviews for The Fae Within

By : shadowfires
  • From Applekissis on January 10, 2006
    Dayum that Jareth...lol
    Great start..Hope to read more soon
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  • From ANON - mekareami on January 10, 2006
    Nice start :) Hope to see more
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  • From ANON - Midnight Lady on January 07, 2006
    if it hadn't been so late, i would have screamed with delight when i realized the crossover. as it was, i chuckled wickedly and rubbed my hands together like a maniac.

    looking forward to more, definately.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    I think it would be a good stor if you finished it.
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  • From ANON - kodak435452001 on January 05, 2006
    Oh!!!!!!! I LOVE this fic so far. I love Severus and Jareth and here there brothers!! Your writing stlye is good. I think you have a great line here. Can't wait to see where it goes. Update soon K?
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  • From ANON - Gracie on January 04, 2006
    Ahahahaha....Jareth.....awesome. David Bowie is pretty amazing and using a Labyrinth reference is never a bad thing. Two thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - Kenda on January 04, 2006
    *Collapses in dead faint muttering something about two of the sexiest fictional charaters ever in the same place*

    Ok you have my full mostly undivided, (you can't put Snape and Jareth in the same story and not expect my mind to wander occasionally), attention.
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  • From ANON - Miari on January 04, 2006
    Oooohhhh, GREAT start! I, too, love King Jareth. Gods! Oh the possibilities! Excellent X-over idea! Normally, I detest crossovers, but THIS one I WILL keep reading.
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  • From ANON - S I on January 04, 2006
    of all the crossovers that you could do.... harry potter and labyrinth... very interesting.
    And putting severus and jareth as brothers? Very different.
    I am very much looking forward to this being updated so I can find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - FranB on January 04, 2006
    Nice!!! A crossover with Labyrinth. When I started reading this story I kind of had Jareth in mind as Snape's brother. It must have been that fae thing in the title. And then at the end of the chapter the identity of Snape's brother is revealed and look who it is. Labyrinth's Jareth. Nice touch. Both of them are nasty and dropdeadsexy. I see the resemblance quite clearly.

    Thank you and I hope to see more soon.
    FranB
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  • From ANON - WickedlyWanton on January 04, 2006
    I really like this. I think that you have something that could be really great. There were a couple of canon things that I saw that could be overlooked for plot-and I don't think that they would make much difference if you were to change them, so I am definitely not going to complain about that. The only thing that probably needs to be changed is when Ron is walking back and forth while speaking to Hermione and Harry, you misspelled 'fervently.' However, that was the only misspelling that I saw and that is a major accomplishment, as most authors usually have more than that (I myself usually post with several and catch more even after my beta reads it!). Well done, and I can't wait for your next update.
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