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Reviews for A Girl Worth Saving

By : AJO400
  • From Rob on March 01, 2021

    I loved all 6 chapters and it was a good story. most people would say not enough sex but i think it was the perfect ending to this amazing story


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 28, 2020

    Not a bad premise for a story, but woefully in need of better editing.  Too many cases of mixed verb tenses, jumbled pronouns, bad syntax, and word omissions.  While I like the idea that Voldemort would use Ginny to get to Harry, and the idea that Harry and Ginny would save each other (that is what love does, afterall); the tasks in the solo-wizard tournament are just too close to what was already in the books.  If ever there was a place for some originality in the HP-verse, that was it.  Lots of potential, but needs work.


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 28, 2020

    Not a bad premise for a story, but woefully in need of better editing.  Too many cases of mixed verb tenses, jumbled pronouns, bad syntax, and word omissions.  While I like the idea that Voldemort would use Ginny to get to Harry, and the idea that Harry and Ginny would save each other (that is what love does, afterall); the tasks in the solo-wizard tournament are just too close to what was already in the books.  If ever there was a place for some originality in the HP-verse, that was it.  Lots of potential, but needs work.


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 28, 2020

    Not a bad premise for a story, but woefully in need of better editing.  Too many cases of mixed verb tenses, jumbled pronouns, bad syntax, and word omissions.  While I like the idea that Voldemort would use Ginny to get to Harry, and the idea that Harry and Ginny would save each other (that is what love does, afterall); the tasks in the solo-wizard tournament are just too close to what was already in the books.  If ever there was a place for some originality in the HP-verse, that was it.  Lots of potential, but needs work.


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  • From ANON - xarther on August 02, 2006
    it was ok
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  • From ANON - imperfect hermione on February 04, 2006
    Its an interesting story but you need to work on your writing and your knowledge of Harry Potter- especially the chronology. Right now, some places make no sense, and the Harry Potter stuff is just all mixed up.
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  • From Muggleman on January 18, 2006
    good story i liked it alot
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  • From ANON - Justin on January 07, 2006
    yo dude...i just got done with the first chap. and im diggin the story..but you need to work on ur typin you tend to leave out words or sometimes the sentences just dont make sense...but other than that im really like the story
    -Justin Doyle-
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on January 05, 2006
    Not bad. Your style needs polishing, but that's usual with first stories.
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