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Reviews for Light on the Dark Side of Me

By : cocoasnape
  • From ANON - teeta on February 06, 2006
    Do you know what your fanfic has done to me? I love yaoi but one thing I really couldn't stand was HP yaoi fanfics. And you have brainwashed me. I started reading your story and I couldn't stop until i read all of it. I LOVE it. There are maybe five or six fanfics in my life that I will never forget (so few as I read several thousands and believe me to remember anything from them is difficult) and you have earned your place among them. What I appreciate in your story is the tension. You carefully built it thruogh every chapter (I was sitting on the edge of my seat all the time) and when I finally thought 'This is gonna be it'meaning they are going to be really intimate you made Snape take one step back. THANK YOU for this because it means there will be some more unresolved tension. Now I'm gonna read the 14th chapter and I will undoubtedly review. See ya.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on February 05, 2006
    I really love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love the way each character is portrayed. Keep up the very good work and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Chinu on February 05, 2006
    You're so cruel! This chapter was blatand and realy realy horrible but at least as good! I'm anxious to read the following chapters!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on February 05, 2006
    Grate update. Loved the Severus angst and Harry trying to care for him. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Silver on February 05, 2006
    I absolutely love your fic. It's great. I've been reading fics for about 5 years and yours is one of the few I really LOVE!
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  • From ANON - fantasy on February 05, 2006
    oh my.. that was angsty.. i just hope so much there'll be a bit of "hurt/comfort" further on.. emphasis on "comfort" :)
    i adore your story so much, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - elseedy on February 05, 2006
    This is a really good fanfic, I love how the story unfolds
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on February 04, 2006
    Oh poor Harry! So worried about Sev. I can't wait to see how they interact next.


    cdk
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on February 04, 2006
    Oh it was very good love... I can't get enough of your writing is is very well written! Get a job soon love ^^

    Keep the chapter coming ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    *sobs* it ended way tooo soon. Please update soon. I beg you. Why would snape end it? What is he hiding? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - asdf on February 01, 2006
    ack!! i hope they get back together...with lots of make-up angsty sex hahahaha
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  • From AriannaMorgana on January 31, 2006
    This is a great story. I look foward to reading more.
    Ari
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  • From erin03 on January 31, 2006
    Oh dear, a small taste of whats to come? Sounds like bad news... but interesting all the same.
    I think you've written Snapes character perfectly, and the conversation was exactly how I would expect Snape to try and end things with Harry. Shame he can't see how much sex appeal he actually holds (Snape I mean). I also think that the conversation shows that Snapes basically a good guy. Cos it means that he actually has morals and feels guilt, that being said if he didn't have any morals he would have obviously allowed things to go futher than he did. Thats why its good that he didn't. It shows that in his heart he isn't actually a death eater.

    Poor Harry though, I like his plan, delicious possibilities. Does that mean he'll become the biggest flirt and stir up Snapes jelousy, or, will something happen and this Ravenclaw isn't as nice as he appears whereupon Snapes protective instincts flood him and he ~cough~ takes care of the problem?

    I'm not sure how good a beta I'd be.
    I wasn't really looking for mistakes when I read your fanfic, I never do, takes the enjoyment out of the fic.
    Can't say I noticed anything wrong... but I offer you my beta services when you need them if you'd like.
    Couldn't see anything that didn't sound British (i.e. Americanisms like Candy instead of sweets) that being said are you British? Cus I am and if you ever have a problem with anything remotally regional, you just shout at me and I'll help you. I can't stand it when people say their writing follows cannot and then you read it and find that it actually isn't, and they haven't even bothered trying to find the British equivilant to whatever word they use. Puts me right off a fic that does. Anyway, sorry, rant's over now.

    Excellent fic, very erotic in places. Couldn't stop reading until the end! Well, not the end but you know what I mean!
    Can't wait for more,
    patiently waiting,
    erin03

    PS thank you for reviewing my fic, it was lovely that you gave my fic a chance, even though you don't usually like non-con. :-) and I hope this review was detailed enough, I noticed the detailed was in caps, lol. So from now on I'll try to be more observant!

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  • From ANON - Cindy on January 31, 2006
    Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.
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  • From erin03 on January 31, 2006
    Merlin, I want to drown in that voice too (shudders)
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