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Reviews for Light on the Dark Side of Me

By : cocoasnape
  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 18, 2006
    Loves it and can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on October 18, 2006
    Great update, want more Severus and how it went with Dumbledore. Looking forward to the sequel, hated to see that this one was ending soon.
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  • From on October 18, 2006
    Only four more? *cries a little*
    Oh well... all good things must come to an end I supose, and ending it soon is better than having it go on forever and having the plot suffer.
    Though... it does seem like there's a lot of things to take care of in just four chapters. Hm... Well anyway... Hermione's such a sweetheart!
    I love her in this story (as much as she's in it). Ron's being a bit of a butt... but it could be worse I suppose.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - snarryfan on October 17, 2006
    I think the story is coming along really well. Also a sequal to this would be quite good and intresting....lol....toodles......
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  • From on October 16, 2006
    Hm... that chapter felt very bridgey. Don't get me wrong, those sort of chapters are important (you have to set up the story obviously), but when one is reading the story with long gaps between chapters, a bridge chapter is a little disappointing. I did, however, really like the revelation of Snape's gift being a pensieve. I also liked how you described the pensieve, how it was made, and how the "silvery stuff" takes a lot of time. It was very J.K. Rowling-esque (I don't generally think that you emulate her very much in your writing style, but you did at this point). So often, fanfiction writers attempt a good magical explaination and, more often than not, I find myself being very pretentious and thinking things like "Oh that's just rediculous, nice try, but you clearly can't come up with something creative that would be in the Harry Potter stories." However, you really pulled it off! I applaud you.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on October 15, 2006
    I don't think I've reviewed this fic yet--and I don't know why! This fic is so heart-breakingly amazing, I love it! I think I've cried over just about every chapter. But this last chapter... *lip quivers* God I feel so bad for Sev, you really do such an amazing job at making the reader want to love him and feel for him. He's so lost and lonely and clueless when it comes to Harry--and Harry is just as bad! GAH! *hugs Sev and Harry--and you!* Hee, I can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on October 14, 2006
    I really love this wonderful story. I've only just started reading this ship and have been surprised by the high quality writing in most stories. Yours is certainly included there. I can't wait to see how Albus manages Severus during his Harry free week. Please keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 14, 2006
    ^_^ I loved this chapter! I'm so happy that Severus was finally able to admit he loves Harry!... even if Harry was sleeping when he did so. It's progress! And now I can't wait for the next chater!
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  • From ANON - The w00t Girl on October 14, 2006
    Thank you for the little review and I surely cannot wait to see what happens, poor Severus, missing Harry, but that is good that he comes out and tells them, that he is in love with Severus. :D Cannot wait for the next upload and find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on October 14, 2006
    Great update, poor Severus. Looking forward to the conversation between Dumbledore and Severus and how Severus will react. Update soon.
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  • From on October 10, 2006
    chapter 24: Hahaha "Happy Christmas you rotten jerk" how funny! That was very nice chapter to contrast with the intense depressingness of the others. OH! Also, I really like how involved Dumbledore is in this story, you don't see that too much.
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  • From on October 10, 2006
    HA!! I knew it! I knew that my Sevey couldn't really be evil! Hoorah! You're character development is so good! I don't think I've never seen a better written Snape. Voldemort being so powerful that Snape actually starts to beleive his own role. That is so brilliant. I'm totally obsessed with this story now. I'm almost sure it's the best one I've read on AFF.
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  • From on October 10, 2006
    That Voldemort/Snape scene was amazing. Definetly one of the most original and well written scenes I've read on AFF. I can't even beleive it! For some reason I'm not really thinking "poor Harry" very much. I mean... I know I should be, but my mind keeps saying "poor Snape" instead. Interesting... very interesting. On to the next chapter!
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  • From on October 09, 2006
    Chapter 18: This is like... the most dysfuntional relationship ever. V. good chapter. The "Good, you're a monster Severus" line was v. good.
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  • From on October 09, 2006
    Alright, so I've been reading this story all evening, and I must say it's quite brilliant. I was very impressed with fact that you were able to set up such an engaging and well written story, even with out putting any smut in it for several chapters (something that I cannot really do, ergo my story is like... pornoworld...). I think you've written the characters pretty well, if Harry is just a little whimpy. Furthermore, the story moves at a decent pace and is unrepetitive. However, I just read chapter 15 and I had a couple things to say. Firstly, I thought the way you put 'ssssss's in many of the words during the parsletongue section was... well... really rediculous. I mean, it's not like parsletongue is just english with the s' emphasized. I just thought "What on earth?!" and it took me out of the story. Also this doesn't make sense:
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