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Reviews for Half Pain

By : Kaworu
  • From ANON - Alexis on January 07, 2006
    Hi, I haven't watched most of the series your fics are based on, but I've read all 6 of the HP books, so I read this fic. Ok, It's good, but too little smutt for me. You should have continued after their kiss towards more intimate comunication. ;) I think you should concider continuing continue this... I'd love to see some actual action on Harry and Draco's part.
    By the way it is Jan 07 so S Rojdestvom!
    And some critique: The translation leaves to desire better. I guess it is because you originally wrote it in Russian and it is diffucult to translate it into another language, especially if that language is not your mother tongue. The Russian version is way better. If you have other fics you mean to translate and you are looking for help with the language, I'll be glad to help (if I have not seen the series I won't comment on the content itself, but I'll help you make the text as close to the original as possible).
    Hope you are not offended.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 06, 2006
    While the story was hard to read it was very good. You might want to look into a beta. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - The doctors In on January 06, 2006
    Good luck to anyone able to understand this story.
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