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Reviews for Horus Goes Home

By : pmczarnecki711
  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 30, 2006
    Its fantastic that you can post chapters at such a fast speed(with quality and quantity). This was another great chapter.. but i was wondering what ever happened to bellatrix. you set up so nice the other chapter. im looking forward to the next update very much.
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  • From ANON - Silver Dragon on January 30, 2006
    I hope you have horus have kids in the future with his girls because I really like stories where harry has kids. can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Someone on January 29, 2006
    No offense, but could you change your lemon scenes. I know you're trying to have Horus have sex a lot, but really, you're just repeating other lemon scenes again in your 'long' scenes. You have a few creative ones, I admit, but only when he's with one person. When he's with a group, you always have the same scenes going on. Could you change that? Either that, or don't put any more group ones, they're getting.....annoying, as it brings down the quality of the story itself if you have a scene that just gets repetitive after a while.
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  • From ANON - Mrriddler on January 28, 2006
    eh...hmm on second thought, not sure about the repeated gang bangs, which is substanceless compared with the first couple of lemons...
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  • From Mrriddler on January 28, 2006
    Holy Shit!!! As a fellow Harry smut writer in our small community, let me congratulate you on this wonderful piece. I'm very glad you let your plot bunny out. Normally I go for stories with more substance, and with a bit less surrealism. I mean you got absolutely wacko list of tv series+anime xovers... but screw it, the sex scenes pretty much rock ass especially given how you take the time to build things up!!! Keep it up my friend!

    "In some ways it was a shame she did not have a daughter to offer her Master. A son to serve would have to do." If I ever do anything with that quote in my story, it's all your fault!!! :P
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  • From ANON - leia on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - maul on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - nico robin on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - nami on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - zoro roronoa on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - sandy on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - pipo on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - chopper on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - luffy on January 27, 2006
    update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.
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  • From ANON - luffy on January 25, 2006
    Update, please
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