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Reviews for Horus Goes Home

By : pmczarnecki711
  • From ANON - maul on January 25, 2006
    Update, please
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  • From ANON - Rogue1615 on January 21, 2006
    I have to say that I am loving this story so far. The way you are combining so many different series is cool It should be really interesting to see where you take this.

    Till later,
    Rogue
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 19, 2006
    Another fantastic chapter. I especially liked the scene involving Bellatrix and her (breaking in) very interesting way to throw her into the fray. She's one of my favorite characters to be with Harry because its always very interesting and creative. Oh i must add that the crossovers are alot of fun and interesting to read about and all the series you mixed into this. (you know who would be a cool character to throw into the fray, The major, Kusanagi Motoko from Ghost in a Shell) Looking forward to your next update :)
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  • From ANON - Junky on January 18, 2006
    Nice fic. Please do continue it. One of the best Super!Harrys I've seen ... love him being so powerful in a smutfic. ;) Oh, one more thing ... I don't like Hermione. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 16, 2006
    Holy fuck!!!! dude you write a mean story! this is so good and long too , its rare to see a nice long lemon filled story on AFF, most are just 1-3 chaps long which is kinda lame but you went all the way with this. I enjoy all the crossovers you did :) althought im not into gangbang(multiple guys on one girl) your story still has top notch sex scenes. looking forward to more stuff :)
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  • From ANON - HornyPhoenix on January 13, 2006
    Im curious, unless i missed it, but ou said incest on the disc o_O whos the incest with?
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  • From ANON - NChisholm on January 10, 2006
    Hello again...
    loved what you did with the Dursleys and the prolouge is much better now... chuckled a bit when harry joined the mile high club... I especially liked your description of the hierichy of evil, the old ones and the great beasts... Hopefully someone else will review soon cause I suck at reviewing.... keep up the good work and thanks for the fun story

    NChisholm
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  • From ANON - Nchisholm on January 07, 2006
    This is a rather fun story to read..... my only problem is with the prolouge being slightly hard to read without spacing.... and it was an intreaging prolouge at that, unlike your other reviewers I have no problem with your summery... because its mostly correct... and besides that your not even done writing yet... The way you built up mystic society and the history of magic in the proluge was rather nice a especially the fact you didn't make it utopian...

    As for you lemon scenes... they were rather ..ahem... satisfying..... well onto other things.....

    I hope you have a suitable torture for the Durslys..... and happy writing


    NChisholm

    PS... may many good reveiws follow you writing
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  • From ANON - anonymoustip on January 07, 2006
    I'll have to agree with the first reviewer.

    Where's your SUMMARY?! Those warnings that you used to describe your story are not needed if you've got that many. The whole page is jacked up because of the "select all" you did.

    That aside, you may have a good story but a better summary would suffice. I honestly wasn't sure if I was going to read it with all of the un-needed warnings on there. It's like there's no suprise. And if you picked all of those, it makes me feel like you couldn't decide what to write.
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  • From ANON - p on January 07, 2006
    How about putting some spaces in the summary so we don't have to scroll left/right to read it... and now everyone else's on the page too

    AU Harry 3year Demon Hunter meets Wizarding world Language,Slave,WIP,Xover,M/F,F/M/M,F/M ,M/F/F,M/F ,Yuri,FemSlash,F/F/F,Bi,Inc,Minor,Anal,BDSM,Bond,DP,D/s,Fist,Furs,H/C,HJ,Humil,Lemon,N/C,Oral,Rim,S&M,SoloF,Spank,Tort,Toys,VS,Xeno

    some spaces in the second line would fix the issue. And does/is your story really have all of that .... that you need to have all of those warnings?
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