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Reviews for Fire On The Inside

By : FlamesofaDragon
  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on January 12, 2006
    This story has possibilities but quite honestly your grammar and spelling are SO bad that I couldn't read it. I would highly recommend that you get a beta reader, as a beta can really help with these types of issues. Until you do, your audience is likely to be a bit limited. I apologize if this seems harsh, but if you were turning this in for a grade...it wouldn't be so good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2006
    Hmm, some problems with grammar and dialogue. But, it is a good start and I do like how you've set up the story. Keep going and have fun with it. I enjoyed the read!
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  • From ANON - Mary_P on January 08, 2006
    Hey! This is a good one. I like it a lot. You should continue! Update please
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