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Reviews for When the Stars Fall

By : CassBlake
  • From ANON - ladyknyght on January 18, 2006
    Hi. I've really enjoyed reading your story thus far. I only have one suggestion/observation... if you were newly married, forced to be away from the person that you've discovered you're in love with, and then end up in your own room with a king size bed... would you go to sleep right away? Draco, being a healthy young man, would never just go to sleep without a really good reason..... :-) Like a horrible exam that Hermoine made him study for.... They are due for a juicy love scene I think. But that's just me. Normally, I think writers should let their characters determine their stories... if Draco and Hermoine are ready for sleep, then that's the way the story is going.

    I know you ended your chapter that they "dozed".... but I can't imagine Draco not making a move to be with his wife. In the last chapter, I'm surprised getting to sleep beside her and not consummate didn't "kill" him.... LOL

    I hope my comments were okay.

    Keep writing
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  • From ANON - ladyknyght on January 17, 2006
    I like where this is going... Keep up the good work. :-)
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  • From ANON - rox4787 on January 14, 2006
    its good so far cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2006
    your work is great. love it and i enjoy looking forward to new chapters keep up the work, and great job on the pace of the story. fallon_hawk@yahoo.com

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  • From ANON - TNgirl on January 13, 2006
    I love this story! Keep updating as fast as possible, please!!
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  • From on January 13, 2006
    This is amazing. Love the story, can't wait for more and I'm very curious as to how they will manage to live at Hogwarts with everyone knowing they're married. Also like the whole Snape has a son story. Most fics I find have Hermione as Snape's daughter or something. Very creative, and written beautifully.
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  • From ANON - jessfelton on January 13, 2006
    that was a gr8 chapter i loved it plz update i wanna see what happens i hope this bcums a long story alread 11 chappies this is fantastic plz update asap i love this stoey fantastic

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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 13, 2006
    Utterly fabulous... I imagine that McGonagall could probably chew nails and spit quarters right now! Oh well, I'm curious as to the ceremony that will take place and I can only imagine Lucius's reaction when he gets the "happy" news! Can't wait for an update! Fantastic writing!
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 13, 2006
    Lovely job!!!! I really appreciate the quick updates. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - k on January 12, 2006
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  • From ANON - undershadows on January 12, 2006
    Really like the story, nice way to bring them together and still keep their perticular temper... can wait to read the rest.
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  • From ANON - AnneJ on January 12, 2006
    its the sweetest story i have read involving Hermione and Draco, two thumbs up. Hope you create more stories like these, makes the world a more bearable place to live in with the hope of a better future
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  • From ANON - Nicola on January 11, 2006
    Please update soon! I love this story, its so different then other Draco/Hermione fics. Please make Draco a nice guy cause I'm beginning to like him. I don't want to guide you but make Harry a creep. I like stories when Draco is the good guy and Harry's the creep
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  • From ANON - ladyknyght on January 11, 2006
    You've got a great beginning here. Keep it up.... I look forward to reading how things go at Hogwarts. :-)
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  • From ANON - ashlynn on January 11, 2006
    I was so happy when I found your story. I have been looking for it for months now. I read it a while back, but could not remember where. It was farther along, so I hope you keep updating because it is a great story!
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