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Reviews for Hermione Full of Grace

By : AdamantEve

From ANON - LilTinyBee on February 02, 2006
For me, this was like a fanfic to end all fanfics. Absolutely perfect! I'm a sap...I think I used half a box of tissues reading this. Characterizations were spot on and the plot was excellent. Very compelling and exciting. Wonderful writing! You are talented! Also, thanks to your beta. I hope to read more of your work in the future!
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From ANON - MKane on January 29, 2006
This is just about one of the best Harry Potter Fanfictions I have ever read, and I have read a bloody lot of them. It was original while staying true to cannon (which is really hard, most great fic destroyes cannon in it's boldness, but you were clever enough to maintain it) You did excellent character develpment on the entire trio, another difficult task (especially with Ron and Harry) It was entertaining, but with some depth, and you mastered more than one point of view. The only thing that even garners some critisism is the post-climax Fluff. I love Fluff as much as the next girl but it did not seem to match the rest of the story. Maybe the family life bit deserves it's own fic, and let the fic natrually wind down after Hermione's recovery.

I Love lot's of fics, and several 'ships, but this one stands out in the crowd. Congrats on an excellent job. I hope you continue with a lot more HPfanfiction, it was a joy to read.
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From ANON - Sarah on January 28, 2006
that is by far one of the best fanfics i've read......u didn't change the charecters to something that they weren't, and u made the plot belivable. i enjoyed it emensely
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From ANON - Brittney on January 28, 2006
That was great,and it had a wonderful ending. I can't wait for the next Harry/hermione fanficton you write.Thanks
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From ANON - Inspire on January 28, 2006
Simply amazing. What a wonderful story. I may have wanted a bit more about the Nordic Elves, but it wasn't necessary. Thanks for posting; you should be very proud of your work.
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From ANON - Dawn on January 28, 2006
I love this story. I like the ending. Great job. I am looking forward to the conclusion of Forever Knight as well. I am addicted to it. Almost every chater breaks my heart. This was a nice brak from that.
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From ANON - angel on January 28, 2006
wow that was great i love it i cant wait to read your other story ..in till next time later for now

angel
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From ANON - angel on January 26, 2006
im glad ron and luna are a thing now and harry and mione are married and going to heave a baby i cant wait in till the next update in till then later for now

angel
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From ANON - aurora on January 26, 2006
Well written. I followed it every step of the way. I was slightly let down with EVERYTHING ending up on a high note (the early angst was so yummy!) but I enjoyed it tons. Your attention to detail is wonderful- I loved the inclusion of all the secondary characters, your involved plots, and your characters seem to stay in line well. So many fanfics completely lose the characters we have come to know and love. The point is to have the characters we are in heart with do naughty things, hopefully with some plot involved. Of course, that seems to be the point in my head, anyway. You allude (sp?) to possible stories in the future..?? Well, what are you doing reading this?-get on the writing already!
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From ANON - Pastel on January 26, 2006
Very beautiful chapter. IT's great.
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From ANON - Dracon on January 26, 2006
BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO, KEEP GOING WITH IT, BRAVO.
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From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
i absolutely LOVEEEEE this story and have been reading it religiously for the past week

pleaaaaaaaase post more chapters soon
im on the edge of my seat waiting!
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From ANON - sempracaveas03 on January 26, 2006
I have followed this for quite a long time, checking for updates once or twice a day. You've done excellent work so far, with only a few grammatical (spelling, puctuation) errors in the entire story as it stands. My grade: A (or in the Wizarding World: O)

Might I make a few suggestions? For the very last chapter (of how ever many you decide to have), you should do an epilogue, where Harry and Hermione have just returned home from the hospital, where she's just given birth to what the doctors (healers) believed to be twins, but turned out to be triplets, and are greeted by their first TEN children, along with Uncle Ron and Aunt Luna (who've been baby-sitting, though Ron wonders why anyone would sit on a baby, as in England I believe the term is child-minding), and their seven children. Uncle Remus and Aunt Tonks come by to visit with their four children, as does Aunt Cecily with her twins. Crookshanks is just as proud as can be, thinking that all the little ones are his.

The Potter's Dozen (a spin-off on the Baker's Dozen, which is 13 instead of 12) from oldest to youngest:
#'s 1 & 2 are singles:
1. Aeric Sirius Potter: Aeric for Hermione's dad; is Norse, meaning: A merciful ruler; Sirius for Sirius; is Greek, meaning: Sparkling, scorching.
2. Coraine Natali Potter: Coraine is for Hermione's mum; a varient of Cora (Greek), both meaning: Little Maiden; Natali is Latin, meaning: Born at/around Christmas-time.
#'s 3 & 4 are twins:
3. Tobias Owen Potter: Tobias is Hebrew, meaning: God is good; Owen is Welsh (and both is a varient of and has a varient of Evan), meaning: Well-born/Warrior.
4. Aiden Mackenzie Potter: Aiden is Celtic/Gaelic/Middle English, meaning: Fire; Mackenzie is Gaelic, meaning: Son of the Wise Ruler.
#'s 5 & 6 are singles:
5. Lillian Selene Potter: Lillian is for Harry's mum; the English varient of Lily (Latin), meaning: Flower; Selene is Greek (and the goddess of the Moon), meaning: calm, tranquil. (In honor of god-mother: Luna)
6. Lucas Alexandre Potter: Lucas is Latin, meaning: luminous; Alexandre is the French varient of Alexander (Greek), both meaning: Great Protector
#'s 7 & 8 are twins:
7. Moira Iorwyn Potter: Moira is Celtic, meaning: Great (also the Greek goddess of Fate and Destiny); and Iorwyn is Welsh, meaning: Beautiful.
8. Zara Odette Potter: Zara is Arabic, meaning: Glorious Dawn; Odette is Greek, meaning: Sweet Melody.
#'s 9 & 10 are singles:
9. Ethan Raoul Potter: Ethan is Hebrew, meaning: Firm; Raoul is the French varient of Raul (Spanish), both meaning: Wolf Councilor. (In honor of god-fathe: Remus)
10. Adelaide Noelle Potter: Adelaide is Hebrew/Latin/Teutonic, meaning: H: noble, kind; L: adorned; T: of noble position; Noelle is French, meaning: Born on Christmas. Heidi is a shortening of Adelaide
#'s 11, 12, & 13 are the triplets:
11. Seth Nicholai Potter: Seth is Hebrew, meaning: The Appointed One; Nicholai is a varient of Nicholas (Greek), meaning: Triumph
12. Ian Zephyr Potter: Ian is Celtic/Gaelic/Scottish, meaning: God is Gracious; Zephyr (pronounced: zah-FEAR) is Greek, meaning: Strong wind/Wind Demon.
13: Nadia Briannan Potter: Nadia is Slavic, meaning: Hope; Briannan is a varient of Briallen (Celtic/Gaelic), both meaning: Strong One.

Total: 7 boys + 6 girls = 13 children

Ron/Luna's:
# 1 is a single:
1. Morgiana Ariene Weasley: Morgiana is a varient of Morgana (Celtic/Gaelic/Welsh), both meaning: Woman from the Sea's Edge; Ariene is Welsh, meaning: Silvery (melody).
#'s 2 & 3 are twins:
2. David Llewellyn Weasley: David is Hebrew, meaning: Beloved One; Llewellyn is Old English, meaning: Ruling.
3. Mordicai Emrys Weasley: Mordicai is Hebrew, meaning: Warrior; Emrys is Welsh, meaning: Immortal (one of Merlin's names).
#'s 4 & 5 are twins:
4. Quorra Isadore Weasley: Quorra is Italian, meaning: Heart; Isadore is a varient of Isadora (Greek/Latin), both meaning: G: Gift of the Moon; L: Gift of Isis.
5. Colette Iona Weasley: Colette is Greek, meaning: Victory of the People; Iona is Greek, meaning: Flower, Royal Jewel.
#'s 6 & 7 are singles:
6. Evelyn Winter Weasley: Evelyn is Celtic, meaning: Lively, Pleasant; Winter is Old English, meaning: Brilliant/Ice.
7. Gwydion Aramis Weasley: Gwydion is Welsh, meaning: God of Magic; Aramis is French, meaning is unknown.
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8. Holly Quynh Weasley: Holly is Old English, meaning: Life-Giver; Quynh (Pronounced the same as Quinn) is Vietnamese, meaning: Ruby.

Lupins:
#'s 1 & 2 are singles:
1. Juliette Helen Lupin: Juliette is a varient of Julia (Latin); Helen is Greek, meaning: Bright One (in Greek mythology she was also the most beautiful woman in the world; her daughter's name was Hermione).
2. Melissa Aurelia Lupin: Melissa is Greek, meaning: Honey-bee (in honor of Dumbledore (means Bumblebee)); Aurelia is Latin.
#'s 3 & 4 are twins:
3. James Orion Lupin: James for Harry's dad; is English, meaning: Conqueror; Orion for Sirius Orion Black; is Greek, meaning: Son of Fire.
4. Tanya Naomi Lupin: Tanya is a varient of Titania (Russian), both meaning: Fairy Queen; Naomi is Japanese, meaning: Beauty above all.
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5. Collin Gage Lupin: Colin is Celtic/Greek, meaning: C: Youthful; G: Victor; Gage is French, meaning: Pledge.

Cecily's (married to Willian Arthur Weasley aka Bill) Twins:
1. Callen Dominic Ackwater-Weasley: Callen is a varient of Calum (Gaelic), both meaning: Bringer of Peace/Dove; Dominic is Latin, meaning: Belonging to the Lord.
2. Dakota Jadis Ackwater-Weasley: Dakota is Native American, meaning: Friend; Jadis is a varient of Jada (Hebrew), both meaning: Wise.

Now all we need to figure out is what's happening with Malfoy's briefs, why Hermione has them, and WHY her bosses WANT them!

Happy Snorkack Hunting,
Sempra
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From ANON - angel on January 26, 2006
wow that ws great please please more ... please update soon ..later for now

angel
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From ANON - Pastel on January 26, 2006
Very cute chapter. It's great.
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