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By : acciosanity
  • From ANON - Mr. Moosey on January 31, 2006
    That was incredibly short. I suppose I haven't stroked your ego enough to make your plot bunnies cum all over your key board, have I? *Sigh* Oh well... I was a bit disappointed with this chapter. Just a bit of advice: even though the dragging out of your chapters is killing me ('cause I'm a randy lil' buggar), it's worth it. Try adding more substance to the chapters, and to add some "feel" into it. You did exceptionally good in the earlier chapters, so try not to loose site of those writing skills to just please your readers. We'll appreciate it even more in the long run if you keep the chapters lengthy and practical. Well, practical enough for this sort of story. Remember, we still want to fall off our chairs laughing.

    So, keep writing, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kass on January 30, 2006
    I love this story, more please!!! I was once forced to drink a cowboy cocksucker...I wonder how Snape would react to that!!! The name is awful but the drink is yummy...Butterscotch Schnapps and Bailey's! Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Wile on January 30, 2006
    Can I just say that I love how you had their official date go so horribly! It was very fitting for the story. And it's good to finally see some action out of these two. (Also, a nice little tease at the end of 12 is the perfect way to get your readers to come back for more. It's a technique I've gotten very good at using, especially when I know it may be a little time between updates.) Ooh, and you did have the two of them getting a bit snippy with each other. Drama alert! hehe. Excellent chapters Elayne. I'm excited to see more.
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  • From ANON - Slave4Severus on January 30, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY!! So, is 'my dear' Hermione's new pet name?
    Got an idea for theme night..its a bit lame, but i would love to see my fave drink one Wednesday night. BLUE MOTORCYCLE!! You could have the place be all decked out like a biker bar from the seventies..or even eighties with some blue light bulbs for lighing.....kinda reminds me of 'the blue oyster' bar..LOL
    Anyway, thought the idea was kinda funny.
    Happy writing!!!
    Slave
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  • From ANON - larana on January 30, 2006
    Final down to the lemon-e-goodness! Please post again soon. I need my drinky fix.
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on January 30, 2006
    I can't believe you are UNDER THE INFLUENCE! That is just plain mean. I was so happy seeing an update and then you stop... An now my cotton undies are in a bunch. Drink some sober up potion and get your arse back to the keyboard!

    I don't know if I should tell hubby about this chapter. MMmmmm . I'll think about it.

    It seemed they were getting ready to box it out. Not to sure they will make it to the hotel room in one piece... Waiting for more.


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  • From ANON - Cat on January 30, 2006
    OMGGGGG *explodes* i cant wait for the next chapter i really really cant you are so evil with this long slow build up then you leave us hanging,,,,, Update Please~!!!!!!! BTW amazing fic so far, one drink that my mom us to enjoy was a
    Pink Lady
    1 Shot Sloe Gin
    1 Shot Vodka
    2 Shots Cream
    fill cup with these and ice, blend and enjoy

    not a great idea but that is what my mother loved,,,, oh yeah and try a canadian night, tehehe or perhaps a fantasy night you know fairy wings etc


    ohhh please update
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 30, 2006
    OMGGGGG *explodes* i cant wait for the next chapter i really really cant you are so evil with this long slow build up then you leave us hanging,,,,, Update Please~!!!!!!! BTW amazing fic so far, one drink that my mom us to enjoy was a
    Pink Lady
    1 Shot Sloe Gin
    1 Shot Vodka
    2 Shots Cream
    fill cup with these and ice, blend and enjoy

    not a great idea but that is what my mother loved,,,, oh yeah and try a canadian night, tehehe or perhaps a fantasy night you know fairy wings etc


    ohhh please update
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 30, 2006
    SO CLOSE SO FREAKING CLOSE!!
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  • From ANON - EVIL MJ on January 30, 2006
    When I started reading this I thought there is no way I am going to like a story like this. But here I am hooked and waiting for more. Please end the suffering and update soon as I am enjoying this way too much!
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  • From ANON - Anon. on January 30, 2006
    oh em eff gee.
    SMUT! (or the beginnings of...)

    yay.

    This is wonderful. YOU are wonderful.
    I'm really enjoying the drinks as the chapter titles.
    Its inspiring me to try out some new drinks.
    I had a very enjoyable weekend.. :D

    moremoremoremore?
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on January 30, 2006
    Been a long time since i found anything this yummy to read. Too bad about not having anywhere for the love birds to go. Hope you'll be updating soon though!
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 29, 2006
    ( Looks around) Where'd he go? He was here a minute ago. Damn quick little bugger Snape is. Better use a sticking charm next time Hermione.
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  • From ANON - cupotrevor on January 29, 2006
    mean mean author...get "us" all worked up and just.....leave us amidst packed cardboard boxes and sheetless beds....pins and needles til we hear from you again!
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on January 29, 2006
    oh that is so mean to end the chapter there NO LEMONS... Just the fresh lemon scent. waiting for more. p
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