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By : acciosanity
  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on January 29, 2006
    Hubba hubba! *rolls tounge back into mouth and wipes off drool* Oh gods I can't wait for the next update!!!! I love you for excepting this challenge!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Mr. Moosey on January 29, 2006
    "...Then apparated home for a wank." BEST WAY TO END A CHAPTER.

    So, let's see if I can stroke your ego until your plot bunnies cum... Damn. Okay, I don't really have anything to say, but I liked the phrase (and your a/n at the beginning of the chapter). You definitely are wicked. Dragging out the chapters because you know it drives us crazy when we have to wait for the sex scenes to roll on in. Like I have said many times before, if you enjoy the story a lot before you get to the smut, the shagging will be ten times better when it arrives.

    Ah, Granger's feet + Snape's erection = OMG HOT! If you can (without making it sound too redundant), add another thing with the feet because it's bloody sexy. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're very good at setting the mood; not everyone can do it as lovely as you can. Even though the characters are VERY OOC, it's still good. The wording is just ... right. Okee. I'm going to shut up now. CUM YOU FUCKING PLOT BUNNIES! Spray your semen all over the author's keyboard so that this story will continue with quick updates.
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  • From ANON - Wicked on January 29, 2006
    YOU TEASE!!!.. It started a bit fast.. but it was nice to finally see them doing something. BUT YOU TEASE ME!! UUGGHH!! He could have taken her on the couch? Cast a vanishing charm on the bed to get rid of the stuff? SOMETHING!! /sigh.
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  • From ANON - AngelEyez on January 29, 2006
    nooooooooo...they are suppose to continue what they started. stupid waitress just HAD to ruin it. argh!!! please update like...now!! please??
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  • From ANON - applekissis on January 29, 2006
    LoL...great chapter...Loved it!!

    Whats the next drink...lol
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  • From ANON - m on January 28, 2006
    oH, HOW SWEET!

    (WRITE FASTER)
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  • From ANON - Wicked on January 28, 2006
    AWWW that was so sweet!! okay its almost 4 now.. i really have to go to bed.. gotta be up in 6 hours.../sigh... cya at the hideaway hun!! GREAT JOB SO FAR!! Keep me posted on when you update, kk?
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  • From ANON - Wicked on January 28, 2006
    okay... its like 330 in the morning and i guess i just need sleep but my side is hurting so much from laughing so hard... favorite line (and i might use it):

    "I want mulitple screaming orgasms!"

    Snape grinned. "Don't we all?"

    That was brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Wicked on January 28, 2006
    OMG!! This has got to be one of the most hilarious stories I have ever read!!! Wonderful job, Elayne!! oh and my favorite line from this chapter:

    It was pouring outside. The rain was coming down in buckets. It was raining cats and dogs. Pick your cliche, that's what it was doing.

    It was like.. whatever.. who cares.. do what you want I'm going on with the story... LOL!!

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  • From ANON - Mr. Moosey on January 28, 2006
    Oooh! It's very interesting. I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From ANON - Bill on January 28, 2006
    What a story line. cant wait to see what comes next. I think that they would like a frog. Maybe they could drink to Nevilles toad Trever. It is peach schapps blue maui and orange juice. Maybe Snape will like them because they are green but Granger will like them because they are sweet. Hope to see an update soon. Bill.
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  • From ANON - albino_raven on January 28, 2006
    i looove your story to pieces!!! i have a drink suggestion. im not sure what its made of but its delicious. its called "The Glow Worm". i personaly think its the best drink ever so i sugest it. anyway, your story is awsome and i cant wait until the next chapter!!!hurry hurry^_^. *sits in front of her computer twittling her thumbs an oogling a snape pic"


    ((oh yeah almost forgot. i cant get to the page with your photoshoped pics T_T did the site get cancled??
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  • From ANON - applekissis on January 27, 2006
    Awww...That was just cute and funny.....Loved both chapters..cant wait to read more
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  • From pickles87 on January 27, 2006
    SQUEEE AN UPDATE!!! Thank you. I was hit with inspiration on the way home from the grocery store. Listening to the oldies station the Pickle. An this song came on.


    You could do a South of the Border theme night.

    COME A LITTLE BIT CLOSER Lyrics
    (by Jay And The Americans)

    In a little caf
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  • From ANON - GaiaAthena on January 27, 2006
    Awww...finally!
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