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Reviews for Under the Influence

By : acciosanity
  • From ANON - Periwinkle on January 27, 2006
    I just discovered your story. It is very well-written and the plot is moving at a nice speed.

    So when do we get the Slow Comfortable Screw? (Sloe Gin, Southern Comfort and Orange Juice)?
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  • From ANON - cupotrevor on January 27, 2006
    awwwww..total sweetness from our resident snakry professor...i'm really loving the slow subtle way they are falling for each other...
    can't wait til they both figure it out and go crashing into the night with each other...
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on January 27, 2006
    Awwww! that is sooooooooooooooo sweet!!!! *melts* I love it! *hugs*

    Love how the relationship is progressing. Not too quick and not to slow. Perfect! *does mild happy dance as is hungover* (lol.....research ;) )


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  • From ANON - Wile on January 27, 2006
    Woowee! This is a trip. Lovely so far, Elayne. Very excellently done. I like the character progression in this. The whole Harry divorce thing is a nice line. And you have some wonderful one liners in this (besides the one Vamps gave us, I mean.) I would not be lying if i said I am looking forward to more of this story. Snape is very Snape-ish and in character, and Hermione's showing the right amount of desperation in the beginning and progressing into a mature character. That's that for my quick character analysis.

    As for the chapter structure, I originally toyed with the idea, but I'm glad I scrapped it for the one I have because that way our stories are quite different. It is indeed interesting to see how we've taken the same original concept and gone in completely separate ways.

    Excellent fic so far and I expect great things to come (did that sound too Dumbledore-ish? lol!).
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    I really like your story
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 27, 2006
    I think they more than like each other. Waiting patiently until one of them gets enough nerve to say something about it. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 27, 2006
    Don't get me wrong I love your fic but, we are dying out here from the teasing!!!!!! Wait... torture is a good thing~Smirk~ nevermind.... ~wanders away laughing, silly me~
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  • From pickles87 on January 27, 2006
    MORE.. we are getting a bit parched.
    aka pickles87
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  • From ANON - Statues on January 27, 2006
    Oh, the tension! Can't wait till the next update

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  • From ANON - MrsMagic on January 26, 2006
    Well I have just read all nine chapters. I love this story. It makes me laugh. -- B
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  • From ANON - Statues on January 26, 2006
    Good God, that's hot! Wheau! More more more, I beg of thee, more! Now!
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  • From ANON - larana on January 26, 2006
    He's warming to the idea. Awwwww... Give me more chapters. I demand it.
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  • From luna26 on January 26, 2006
    Me Likey! Was so happy to see another chapter posted today. More drink ideas ....

    Snake Bite:
    * 1 oz. VO, * 3/4 oz. Peppermint schnapps

    White Lion:
    1 1/2 oz. Light Rum, Juice of 1/2 Lemon, 1/2 tsp. Grenadine, 1 tsp. Powdered Sugar, 2 Dashes Bitters, Blend with ice, Strain to Serve up in a chilled cocktail glass

    Kiss In The Dark:
    3/4 oz. each; Gin, Cherry Brandy & Dry Vermouth
    Shake with ice, Strain into a chilled cocktail glass

    and I think you should read this one... http://cocktails.about.com/library/recipes/blwitnogwit.htm (people are insane)
    Great Job, I like a slow buildup (tease!) I await the next chapter on baited breath :)
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 26, 2006
    ROFLMAO Essence of Snape?!! ~giggle~ too funny!!! Please excuse me if I borrow that line. ~wanders away giggling ~
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  • From ANON - pickles on January 26, 2006
    Thank you for a new chapter. It was great. So is "little" Hermione going home to take care of her needs?? Seems she couldn't get enough of the Prof?

    Is Sam really Albus in disguise? Is that why he dropped the glass when Hermione offered her "cherry"? How long did Sev stay? Oohhh what is said to him back at school with the teeth marks? Will his students see? Will they think he's gone Vamp?

    Aww thanks.
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