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Reviews for Gela Temporem

By : MrsTaraYuyMaxwell
  • From ANON - Arwen on October 24, 2006
    YOU NEED TO CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!
    :P

    I have a couple of suggestions on it though.

    1) You could have it go with any pairing really. I personally would prefer Hermione Granger / Severus Snape, but that is just a preference.

    2) You could get a small group of writers, including yourself, and do various versions of this story. Like make this first chapter into something of a challenge. That way, the different shippers would all be satisfied and you'd get the overall credit for such a wonderful first chapter.

    I myself have been pondering over the many different possibilities of such a story. I've found myself wandering through the story as to how Hermione might react to this, and how Harry might. So once again I emplore you to continue writing this story, and would like to reiterate that it might be wise to write two or three versions to this story or if you don't personally want to, then lend it out to someone who is very clear as to that the first chapter belongs to you. Cause obviously, no matter WHAT pairing you choose or do not choose, you will get some opposition.
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  • From ANON - TheMadButterfly on October 23, 2006
    ooohhh....Hmm...either Sirius/Severus or James/Severus ...^_^ typical i know but its MUST BE YAOI!!! i am excited for the next update! ^_^ hurry please
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  • From ANON - amelia on September 23, 2006
    it's a wonderful story!! please continue!!! i would love it if there were slash in this story, even though i was never a big severus fan, i hope he hooks up with someone his own age, like sirius or lucious malfoy... i really like how you wrote it, and hope that something really bad will happen to barnaby... like he getting castrated in a horrible 'accident'... =D anyways, good luck with continuing the story!!! hope you'll update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Kikiamonkey on September 11, 2006
    I enjoy the story and hope that you continue with it. I have no crtiques to offer as this is one of the better written stories that I have come across. I would like to see it yaoi but it's not a problem if you would rather not. if the writing continues the way that it is I would be happy to read any story that you decide to write.
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  • From ANON - Child of the Darkened Moon on August 18, 2006
    this story is definitely unique if nothing else... but it really is quite interesting. I'm entranced. And to answer you questions I believe at least a little slash?yaoi is in order... you can't leave the poor man all alone, I mean he's always wanted a family right? And... let's see, well whoever he ends up with should be somehow related to the potion's incident... either they caused the problem or they took up vehemently for whoever caused the problem. Oh mym we've already narrowed it down... Neville, Seamus, Dean, or Harry. Although I would probably lean towards Harry just because... can you just imagine Harry's reaction when he finds out his potion master has been pregnant for over sixteen years (depending on when you set your story takes place.) That means... in the philisophical way of viewing things the baby would be older than whoever the other father is... But please don't leave him all by his lonesome.

    Child of the Darkened Moon
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  • From ANON - max on August 16, 2006
    hi
    it's max speaking, i'm sorry if my english is not good but i'm french. i really love this fic, i hope you'll continue. i'm not really in mpreg, but this one seem quite good so please continue.
    i think that a yaoi will be good, i don't think a girl will want to be with a man that carries a child...
    for the pairing maybe a severus/remus or a severus/harry could be good too.
    so keep on writing because it's really great.
    see you
    max
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  • From ANON - Rchan on August 10, 2006
    This is a great story!!!! I can't wait to see what you do next! Your skill is impressive, so please add the next chapter tommorow!!!
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  • From ANON - Syrki on August 09, 2006
    1)You should continue it.

    2) I'm not sure if there should be a pairing.


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  • From ANON - boyonboy on August 04, 2006
    hey if you are gonna do a rape do a rape or make it that sevvie is so abused that being raped dry wouldn't bother him so much. cuz anal sex hurts. dry it hurts a fuck of a lot. but do continue i think it is interesting. a sev/voldie pairing could be interesting
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  • From ANON - spikeluver on August 04, 2006
    hey so far i like the fic. a lot. hehe. I think that a few more details about what the spell does would be awsome and maybe a sev/lucius fic, cuz like a harry or draco would just be wierd when the child would be older then his lover and he really hates sirius, james and lupin at this point....and pettygrew is just nasty. or maybe he could be found out and run to voldemort.....? a nice sev/voldie pairing hehe..
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  • From ANON - 666corvis666 on August 04, 2006
    keep going! this fic promises to be entertaining.
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  • From ANON - 1fan on August 01, 2006
    I love it!!!!
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  • From Chrys on July 25, 2006
    You wish for an opinion on whether you should continue this fic or not? I believe that you should. It's different from what I've seen. Alright, I have seen the plot line before. I was the editor for the story, but this is a good take on the idea, and the fact that it takes place with Severus, and not Harry for once, makes it a lot more interesting.

    As for the whole yaoi idea, that's personally up to you. It would be interesting to see, but that's just my personal opinion.

    I do hope to see more of this story in the future.
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  • From Chandrima on July 22, 2006
    Ok, I really do like where this is going. I have some few things I would like to point out, I thought that when talking about what happens for the time the fetus is frozen, there could have been a few more details (since Sev got it from a book). But other than that, I really liked it. I think that Dumbledore should find out somehow, maybe before the potions accident or afterwards and that there should be yaoi, but I just don't know of which pairing... maybe Severus/Harry, or Severus/Draco... or maybe the three of them together! ^.^ But what ever you decided, I'll read it, cause I really want to see where this is going to go.
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  • From ANON - Selenea on July 20, 2006
    i really like this story and i sincerly hope you continue with it.
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