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Reviews for Soul Pieces

By : Leviosa
  • From ANON - MarieJoyCarter2007 on January 20, 2006
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ana on January 20, 2006
    I like this story. it's really very interesting and exciting and your characterisation is pretty spot-on too. Your grammar and syntax are horrible, though. Get a good beta.
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  • From ANON - hermyone on January 20, 2006
    great story!! I like it very much, I don't have any idea how you end this story just hope it's happy ending(plsssssssss since JK already kill Hermione in her canon HBP I hope you rise her back)
    update soon, I'm waiting.
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  • From ANON - Dracon on January 17, 2006
    you made the sentances to long AND STOP WITH THE LITTLE BOXES, @ THESE, % THESE, AND ANYTHING ELSE THAT MAKES IT LOOK JUNKY, because i had trouble reading the last four or five chapters you typed up.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 17, 2006
    ohh no now what ... please please update soon ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 17, 2006
    Oh, I hope Hermione smacks him good whenever they see each other. Not liking Harry much.
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  • From ANON - Brittney on January 17, 2006
    THat was really good ,but i wish Harry would said how he felt sooner.
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  • From ANON - THX1138 on January 17, 2006
    To Chapter 15 and 16:
    I hate to read stories, where the characters are acting so stupid, that it's hurt. I don't understand why there are so many stories with this kind of problem. Is it so much fun to write about people who are stupid? I don't understand. It's okay if they are in a short phase of denial, but here you have a Harry, who is so damn stupid, that I want to kill him every second. And this is all your fault, because you are writing him stupid. This is really hard to stand for me. I think I will skip a few chapters and get directly to the good stuff. Greetings.
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  • From ANON - Dracon on January 17, 2006
    your last last chapter should not have happened because, harry love's monie so much and i think that is the next key to find the next horcuxs is the LOVE that harry and monie have for each other, just like when harry's mother sacrrficed herself to save harry' life and LOVE is the key to destory it
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  • From ANON - Riven on January 17, 2006
    that is the worst decision i have EVER seen a guy make, period.
    i seriously hope you havent abandoned this fic and i cannot wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 17, 2006
    Bastard! harry, that is...not you the author. Maybe Hermione will go seek solace with Ron.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 17, 2006
    ohh harry you dunce why did you say that you should have let her talk first..... man now what is going to happen .. please more ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Mongo on January 16, 2006
    There are formating problems with chapters 11 & 13 please look these over as it is extremly hard to read them as they are
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  • From ANON - mongo on January 16, 2006
    I think you need to reload chapter 11 it seenes to be messed up. Good story so far Harry/Hermione is one of my favorite pairings
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  • From ANON - angel on January 16, 2006
    tonks your are so right the men in the house are thick .. please please please update soon ..later for now

    angel
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