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Reviews for Soul Pieces

By : Leviosa
  • From ANON - Brittney on January 16, 2006
    Wow,that was good the last chapter was the best,please update soon.
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  • From ANON - MarieJoyCarter2007 on January 16, 2006
    I love this story so far. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Brittney on January 14, 2006
    Yes,i loved the last chapter,i think it will be Ron or Mrs. Weasly at the door
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  • From ANON - angel on January 14, 2006
    ~lol~ wow that was great ... i love it ... please please update soon i would love ot read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - draregerreip on January 14, 2006
    Interesting plot so far. I really enjoy reading your story. Spelling and grammar are a bit of a problem though. Some of the sentences ("Give me it" instead of "give it to me" for example) made me think that english was not your mother tongue (neither am I). After looking at your profile, I guess you are from Brazil (or living there). That being said, I believe your story deserve a beta and maybe also to be posted on Portkey.org (Harry/Hermione ship website). Thanks for your work and do continue.
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  • From ANON - dracon on January 14, 2006
    this story is really starting to get really really alsome i think you should put in 10 more chapters right now
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  • From ANON - Drey Towson on January 14, 2006
    First of all, I like the plot. But you need to check your spelling and grammer errors. Otherwise, I thought it was a good story.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 13, 2006
    they have more then lust for each other ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on January 13, 2006
    wow go mione ... please please update soon ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on January 13, 2006
    wow please please please update soon i wouldlove to read more..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - LegalAlien on January 12, 2006
    Awesome start!
    I can't wait to read on!
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  • From Frodo on January 12, 2006
    Hmmm, I'm rather interested in seeing where this story is going. I shall be eagerly awaiting for more, it was written really well. Surprisingly, the account of how the hymen is broken is fairly accurate, which is kind of hard to say on this site. Rarely do you see stories that make note of it, good job. I shall be one of your readers. Oh, yes. Before I forget, the sex scene was rather hot. Love the description, I do. Keep writing, I'll check up on you fairly often.

    x3
    Aeron Rhiannon
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