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Reviews for In the Closet

By : bellgirl
  • From ANON - Challenger on August 03, 2006
    hey huh, so sorry it took me so long everytime i'd get on someone would call, lol. so i love it so much it's so awesome! don't worry i am not let down at all, better than i thought it'd be, great job!( and i am a big fan, lol) honestly i really had no problems with reading this, of couse i am not the sharpest lol. anyway so i think you write awesome and are very creative. i was so into it that i have no idea if there was anything wrong with the grammar. but again i am not an expert. all i know is that i am so glad you wrote this, and i enjoyed every word so far. i can't wait for the next chapter! i finally get to read what happens (my choice i know) but please put the next chapter up what are you waiting for it's done! lol so... i feel somewhat bad for that review, i know you aren't bothered by it. it's just well i don't really get it i guess. i do with the grammar, but if you get that worked out (i didn't see any mistakes just going by what you said)then there is nothing wrong at all, this was wonderful. i hope i am making it clear i feel like i need you to know how good you are. i guess what i am trying to say is mistakes are mistakes but they can be fixed they're just technical but if you can't write then you just don't have it no matter how good your grammar is. and honey trust me you have it. from the bottom of my heart i mean it no smoke blowing. i promise. so anyway luv yah and can't wait for more. i am so hooked. kisses my friend. :)
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  • From ANON - Fialle on August 01, 2006
    This is wonderful. If this is you not putting all your effort in I'd like to see what you come up with when you do. Hope you plan to continue cuz I am thoroughly hooked.
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  • From ANON - mona on August 01, 2006
    that chapter was so fun! i didn't stop smiling even once through the whole thing. i chuckled out loud so much and when it got to the i guess it was the boiling point i was the edge of my chair, so exciting can't wait for an update! i really really love this story! update as fast as you did this one please! i wonder how milton will take it!
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  • From ANON - Spoutnik on August 01, 2006
    Getting better and better!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2006
    I LOVE IT!

    - Sam
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on August 01, 2006
    oh gettinng soooo goodd i hope u continnue soon ttyl
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  • From ANON - firewall on July 31, 2006
    Oh-oh! Pansy silence is sometimes the better part of valour! This may not be the time to tell all! LOL That chapter was great! I loved their argument...so childish! hahahahahahaha
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  • From ANON - anne on July 31, 2006
    I LOVE this story. Don't ever stop writing it! Please please please update!

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  • From ANON - Shardae on July 31, 2006
    I wonder if she's gonna tell him tha truth... But i hope you post soon so i can see what happens between Hermonie and Draco...
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on July 31, 2006
    Very nice "breaking point" chapter, though it seems like it could use a little more description to highten the emotions even more. For example, simply remarking on how Draco or Hermione are standing, seething, glaring, the hot or cold feelings etc, would create a steamier unresolved sexual tension that you have going. Of course, as the reader, we can always plug that stuff in on our own, but it's more interesting when the author gives us exactly what they're seeing in their head for the scene. I'm enjoying the more mature Pansy and the forgiving nature that you keep Hermione in. Sometimes it seems a little too mature (since I remember very clearly all the stupid reactions I had as a teen from the massive amounts of hormones), but then you throw in spats and other things that balance their age nicely. Thank you for the notice about the update! I await your next chapters, yay! (oh and you did fine on the girl/girl action, made it seem very plausible, so grats!)
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  • From ANON - fiona on July 31, 2006
    that chapter was very entertaining! i loved it! this story is really fastly moving it's way up my list of favs! i love everything really there isn't a certain part to point out. but this last chapter made me laugh, good job and exicution. update soon i love the cliffy as long as it doesn't last long lol!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    your story is hysterical! I really hope that you update soon, because now I am extreamly curious about what will happen between Hermione and Draco, as well as if Pansy will every tell Milton! Great story though!!! Until next time!
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  • From ANON - kay on July 31, 2006
    i had the same idea for the paper.nice story

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  • From ANON - sanaa on July 31, 2006
    oh man just when it was getting really good Pansy and milton had to ruin it! oh well i'm sure there will be other chances...great story u have here...update soon plz
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on July 31, 2006
    Of all the rotten times to walk back into the room. LOL Loved the chapter and your story is not boring or crap by any means. You keep going because I and many others will keep on reading. I'm so glad this site is back online. Talk about serious withdrawals. :)
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