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Reviews for In the Closet

By : bellgirl
  • From ANON - Gracie on July 31, 2006
    I was under the impression that this was an adult fanfiction website. I thought that members and visitors must (or should...) be 18 years of age or older. One would think then, considering that the majority of those on the site are over 18 (and apparently attending or graduated from a post-secondary institution), we would be MORE critical of the quality of the stories submitted for our reading pleasure. One would think that as we are, for the most part, over the age of 18, we would have an idea of what technically sound writing would be. One would also think that as we are so educated and would then be accustomed to academic writing, we could not honestly leave a review for this story and not comment on the frequency of grammatical errors. One must also hypothesize that as we seem to so educated, we would have SEEN those errors as we read the story.

    I would also think that as an educated group, having read the first 7 chapters and believing that they had been beta read and still managed to have sentences like "Oh um sorry I had a bit of something in my throat I
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on July 31, 2006
    Wow! But did you have to leave us on such a cliffie? And wow... that interaction between Draco and Hermione... Love it ;) Can't get enough of it lol. I can't wait for the next one :D
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  • From ANON - Given2Fly on July 31, 2006
    Oh, I almost forgot...

    Gracie dear, you really need to learn the fine art of constructive criticism. If you are willing to point out flaws and the like in certain stories, then you should do it in a friendly, respectful manner. Coming right out and telling someone that they "need to get a new Beta" comes off as a bit harsh.

    As to your opinion of the story itself, well, everyone's got an opinion and are free to express them. However, if you don't particularly care for the story and find it difficult to read, then why bother coming back to it? Just a question mind you. It's just a pet peeve of mine that when I see someone reviewing a story multiple times after having first voiced their opinion that it was only "okay" or that it was "difficult to read", I have to wonder why bother coming back to it at all?

    I have my minor in Journalism and quite honestly, aside from the occasional glitch that aff.net throws in to different chapters, I see nothing wrong with the way this story is written. But, as I said before everyone has an opinion and they're entitled to it. I just felt the need to voice mine on this particular subject matter.

    For the author and the beta: Fantastic job! Keep up the great work and I appreciate all the effort that has been put forth thus far in creating an enjoyable reading experience!-
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  • From ANON - Given2Fly on July 31, 2006
    You are officially an evil, evil person! LOL C'mon...you can't leave us hanging like that! It'd be too cruel!

    Keep up the good work...I really can't wait to see where this one is going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    loving it update soon please
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    I love it! Girl on girl action doesn't usually do much for me, but that last chapter was great. I Can't wait for you to continue. Will Pansy will be caught? hmmm. Don't leave us hanging for too long!
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  • From ANON - mona on July 31, 2006
    that was one of the best girl on girl bits i have ever read! i am so glad you have finally updated it's been like 6 months or something lol i love this and please please update this soooooon!
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on July 30, 2006
    hey i really liked it..i hope u update soon..dont let milton find out let pansy enjoy her night
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  • From ANON - CHASTITY on July 30, 2006
    THAT WAS GREAT YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ariel S. on July 30, 2006
    NUH END!
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  • From ANON - Bellgirl's BETA on July 30, 2006
    Gracie,

    Thank you for your examples from the previous chapters. I should have reserved my questions until I received clarification from you as to what chapters you were referring to. I think I can make out most of the review you left in between the miscellaneous characters inserted by what I assume is your word processor.:)

    I have signed on to be Bellgirl's Beta though I have only reviewed chapter 7 and will go over the previous chapters to correct those errors which I wholeheartedly agree are incorrect and need correction. Alas they were not reviewed by me and I should have clarified that with you first.

    I do indeed have a degree in English and I am currently working on my Master
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  • From ANON - carabella on July 30, 2006
    OMG!!! that was such a great chapter, honestly this is a really creative and fun story, update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on July 30, 2006
    That was the best chapter yet! I'm very excited to hear that you have a couple more chapters to upload still. When will those be coming out, soon I hope?? I like your characterization of Hermione, she's not as stuck up as many other authors portray her. Please be swift with the next chapters, I want to know what happens!!
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  • From ANON - superscar on July 29, 2006
    This is a fabulous story, I love everything about it. Keep it up, it's excellent.
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  • From ANON - Gracie on July 29, 2006
    Well well well. What do we have here? What
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