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Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble Part 1

By : cearrae
  • From ANON - Hypatia on February 06, 2006
    Wow! Wonderful character development, and the writing skills are superb. I'm going to guess that the "Manchester lass" is the OFC in this story?

    Nicely done so far!
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on January 24, 2006
    Yes! Great chapter! Can't wait to find out what Severus does to Bella. Loved the line "On my terms" gave me the shivers. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on January 22, 2006
    GREAT second chapter. I love the background information on Snape's childhood.

    Can't wait for what happens next between him and Bella!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    Sod the mother and her sister. The beginning was good.
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  • From Angie30 on January 14, 2006
    Wicked good start! I can't wait to read more. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on January 14, 2006
    What a spell-binding beginning! You've got your readers hooked from the first paragraph.
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