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Reviews for Why Do You Love Me?

By : CBeta
  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on February 05, 2006
    I always love getting responses to reviews I send, especially when they're positive. I thought the idea was good too, though I can't take credit for it. It all goes to the author I'm betaing for. She actually just finished the story and posted the unbetad chapters. It's from the Naruto fandom, though it's AU so it's not really necessary to have any knowledge of the series. It's called "Just another day in paradise" by Arora. She's pretty good at making things gory and angsty. If your interested you could read her other story too, though that one needs some knowledge of the story to understand what's going on. Now on to your story. I do try to make an effort to put a little more than "I like your story, please continue" and I also try to give real criticism, so I'm glad you appreciate it. I'm not sure how much I can give you this time around though. Somehow lately I've been having trouble getting good reviews out. But here goes. I liked this new chapter, though I was a bit disappointed in Hermione. She's like super genius girl, she should have made the connection between the party and the glamour and the letter by now. Though I guess by all that scribbling she was doing at the end, she's making the connection, maybe she's just trying to make sure before she says anything. And Ron, well he's just hopeless isn't he. Well either that or he subconciously realizes that something is wrong but he doesn't want to deal with it. Though I'd think it's more he's just a little slow:D I guess I can understand the whole people change thing, I should. I have a friend who made like a 180 switch over a short period of time, she went from an obsessively studious bookworm to an obsession with shoplifting and piercings and guys. So yea, I can see that. Though I still think that they should have at least questioned it a bit, especially after they got that letter and being in the world they are in where people can imitate another without too much effort. And about the idea influencing the story, that would be cool. That's the reason I passed it on. Anyways that's all I got for you today, have to get up early tomorrow. Hope to see an update soon and to see what kind of influence the idea had. And I hope you like the story, I think it's really well-written, it just has a few spelling problems I haven't gotten rid of yet in the chapters before I started and in the later ones.
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  • From ANON - Alison on February 04, 2006
    Wow! Why doesn't Hermione just ask Mr/Mrs Weasley to remove the glamour that she's sure he's wearing??? =o) Great chapter! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - lita on February 04, 2006
    I am soo enjoying this story!! I so can't wait for the next chappy!!! Your doing a great job on the story. Update ASAP!!!

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  • From ANON - Alison on February 03, 2006
    I just have so many questions after that chapter that I'm just going to have to beg you to update REALLY QUICKLY to see if the next chap covers some.

    Pretty please???????? =o)
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  • From HauntedNightmares on February 02, 2006
    poor harry. now i'm interested in this other money and house. please update soon.
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  • From HauntedNightmares on February 02, 2006
    i'm scared. these people are evil.
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  • From ANON - Banner on February 02, 2006
    At last!
    We're away from THEM.
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  • From ANON - MedicNinM on February 02, 2006
    Poor Harry! TT_TT abused at home. friends not beliving him/knowing that wasn't him. And Draco taking his presents! Life is cruel!!!
    *sniffles* I hope someone finds out about the raping/abuse... and 'takes care of' Dursely!!
    AND i hope that same someone... *coughDRACOcough* also takes care of Harry! ...but in a good way! wait, that doesn't sound quite right...
    ^_^
    anyways I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more!
    Keep up the good work, and hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on February 02, 2006
    Wow, Draco is a little prick isn't he. He doesn't realize what he really did, if he hadn't come then they probably would have gone to get Harry, though he is right, though should have been able to tell that that wasn't him. Somehow that reminds me of those episodes of Charmed when one of the sisters gets replaced by somebody and they never figure it out until the person reveals themself or the sister who's kidnapped escapes. I've never gotten that, if you supposedly know a person so well, you should know when they aren't acting normal. I've been having trouble with some authors I've sent reviews too lately because they don't like what I write, but I like to test the water a bit with each new author so I'm going to just do what I normally do. I like the storyline and I hope to see Vernon get his soon. And with all the injuries that Harry has that seems likely. In one of the stories I'm betaing, the main character is raped and one of the ways they figure it out is that he had some tearing in his intestinal wall that caused a severe infection. So combined with all the cuts on his back and being raped, I could definitely see Harry getting a really bad infection and having to do to a mediwitch/wizard who will see that he's been raped. That especially seems more of a possibility after that comment that you have at the end of the chapter where Arthur tells him that he looks peaky, I could see that being the beginning of a fever. Anyways I'm going to stop now because I have a test tomorrow and I have to go to bed so I can get up early to do some studying. I hope that I didn't upset you like I seem to upset other authors when I try to predict (or maybe even slightly influence:D) the outcome of the story. I don't get why it upsets them so much, they could just ignore me, but oh well. Love your story and I hope to see an update soon.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on February 02, 2006
    Need chapter 5! Draco did it as a joke? Oh if he only knew what harm he had caused! Oh I need more!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 23, 2006
    Need chapter 4! Poor Harry! Dudley tried to help Harry but he could have done more. He could have stopped his dad. Why would someone impersonate Harry unless they wanted Harry punished. I wouldn't be surprised if his "gifts" turned up at Hogwarts so he had "proof" he was at the party.
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  • From ANON - scully on January 23, 2006
    very dark, very interesting. will be interesting to see where this goes once harry finally gets the hell out of that house! i hope voldie kills vernon and petunia--dudley has redeemed himself, hopefully he'll be away at school when voldie comes to kills hi parents! please let arthur and co. finally believe harry. how can they not when they see him? it would be impossible! i wonder how draco is going to fit into all this as well. look forward to your updates!
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  • From ANON - Alison on January 23, 2006
    Wow! Poor Dudley... he was just trying to help a guy out. Great chapter. Please update soon. =o)
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  • From ANON - Alison on January 17, 2006
    Oh man! Poor Harry! I hope his head wound isn't too bad!
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  • From aloveablegimp on January 17, 2006
    I really like your story and I hope that you update soon!! How in the world could Harry have showed up?? Please make this better!
    Love and a Peace,
    ~*~Kates~*~
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