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Reviews for Why Do You Love Me?

By : CBeta
  • From ANON - brittany on January 16, 2006
    Oh No!!!!
    please let harry be okay!!!
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Stacey Jo on January 16, 2006
    Wow, this is intense. I love the dark spin you put on Vernon. I fully think him capable of it anyway. Can't wait for more!! Thanks for writing.

    - Stacey Jo
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 16, 2006
    Someone impersonated Harry? How? Why? Need chapter 3!
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  • From WynterRose on January 16, 2006
    omg...wow, intense...the last bit of it still has me. I think I might actually like Dudley.

    *blushes* ok, I promise each review will actually be a bit more in depth than just me liking it. Yes, what you said about A.P. made sense to me. I just got into a slight discussion of how my Harry can be both dom/sub at the same time.

    This chapter had me confused in bits. It seemed to jump a bit, such as when Harry was laying there, Dudley came up and went to breakfast. Harry, I thought, couldn't really move very well, but he could be quite healed...not questioning that really. He then seemed to be down at breakfast quickly after the letter arrived. I'm not quite sure why A.P. would complain about him leaving because that is something to be thankful for, the freak is gone, but her small way of trying to control him, I guess.

    I was just as confused as Harry when he got the letter from Hermione. I had forgotten that he sent a letter to them, but when she said he was there it was very strange. So who went in his place? Dudley maybe?

    I hope this was as good as the first. I fear I have to go do some writing and updating of my own...can't sit and read tonight *is all sad*
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  • From ANON - Vudu on January 15, 2006
    OH NO poor Harry. I hope he's okay. Discusting dursleys at least Dudley's being okay now. hope he helpfs him out. update right away with more kay?
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  • From ANON - hina on January 15, 2006
    Hmm, this is very interesting. I still can't say much about it exept that I hope you will continue it soon.. I want to see what Petunia will do. Very good start.
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  • From ANON - Joana on January 15, 2006
    I can't believe you just left it there... I was so into the chapter that I screached in outrage in the end... how could Petunia say it was Harry's fault? Who would come onto that disgusting creatyure named Vernon? Argh, it left me disgusted in the end. Have you more chapters already written? How often do you plan on updating? Hope to read more from you soon, ne?

    Kitty

    P.S: If you answer me please writte as a subject JoeyCat... Because I've been receiving so much junk that I simply delete everybody that I don't know the subject of!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 14, 2006
    That horrible low down good for nothing aunt! She actually believes that? How horrible! Need chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2006
    wow ~ ouch. Poor Harry... and yet now that I've been through that with him I HAVE to know what happens. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Banner on January 14, 2006
    *Intense* setup. I can't wait to see where you go with this...
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 14, 2006
    ah...for a real review...

    for the "same old story, same old theme" i still like it. There is just something that always comes from the dursley rape/abuse fics that pulls everyone in. From what I can see so far, it is interesting. I'm actually almost glad that Harry didn't use the portkey. somehow instead of the three broomsticks, i see him ending up in the middle of a DE meeting. maybe it is because I sincerely hate cho with a passion or maybe it was just the letter. Harry was surprised to hear from her almost as if they had not talked in an entire year, so it was totally out of the blue. so a good plot device, makes the reader think.

    my possible critique would be in Aunt Petunia. It seems as if she had at least two personalities in the fic. She was cold and standoffish yet took care of him. It was still in character for what she normally is, even though she was "nice" to him by taking care of what wounds she could. She told him that she kicked Vernon out. Again, it wasn't too far of a stretch. Then she is in her room and blames it all on Harry. She didn't run out and yell at Vernon to leave, if he was kicked out of the house. She just sat there and blamed it all on Harry. To me this was very conflicting. No, I didn't have a problem with her laying there listening. Most people would do that, sad to say.

    then again, i am in a strange mood so please feel free to ignore my ramblings. I would like to see where this goes, so (the required) UPDATE soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Katelynn on January 14, 2006
    So far this is pretty much excellent in a terrifying, brutal way. You write pain and abuse in a matter-of-fact but tender and sympathetic manner, rather than all corny like a lot of stuff you see floating around. I really think you should continue this. It's wonderful, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it, especially with the whole Draco thing. Keep up the awesome work!!
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