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Reviews for Hogsmeade, Circa 1826

By : TaranSwann
  • From ANON - Me on January 27, 2006
    Good story so far. Entertaining and enjoyable.

    Hey Asta (or whatever your name is) I suggest you go down to Knockturn Alley and purchase yourself an imagination.
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  • From ANON - Isadax on January 25, 2006
    First, I love your story and hope you update soon. But I think that severus should be a little prooder than that. Well, I love angst, and this situation would be perfect for it.
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  • From ANON - Lissa on January 25, 2006
    Wow. Amazing story. When I got done with Chapter 6, I just hung my head because that's all that's there right now. Simplely amazing. And don't listen to those mean people who put your story down. Sure it has it's mistakes but nothing an AU story can't have. While I do hope that you update soon, I understand that can't always be the case. (I haven't updated my stories in over a year;))

    Sitting on pins and needles awaiting Chapter 7,
    Lissa
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  • From ANON - antipyro on January 24, 2006
    Pure entertainment!!! As long as it's well written and it's got some plot.....

    I really don't know how some writers continue to put out their work, thinking they worked really hard on it, so we could enjoy it, then get something like that thrown at them????

    Bravo for your stance.

    I'll wait patiently for the next chapter. I love this.
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  • From ANON - woof on January 24, 2006
    It's AU, it isn't supposed to be 'true to history'. No one is standing there with a wand at your head making you read!!! I, for one, am greatly enjoying this story. Can't wait for Harry to try out the new toys. Thanks Taran!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 24, 2006
    ok, I can't shut up again....
    If there is anyone that will tell the world snape has magic, it has to be the shopkeeper.
    He will probably sell alot more then normal, just to the people comming in to hear the rumor from the sorce. that is insentive. I'm putting my money on the shopkeeper.
    that's all :-)
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 24, 2006
    Um, your welcome? I just fealt totaly compeled to write that other review after reading it. I'm glad it meant so much to you. Hope your health issue isn't something grave.
    Update as frequently as you can. Your more frequent then I usually are with my fic. so I wouldn't worry about it. I usually come check in on the snap/harry section once a week or when I get bored. I'm usually in the harry/draco section :-P So, heads up! I'm comming over here just for your fic :-)
    Great chapter BTW. liked the info about the shirt and all the tidbits here and there.
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  • From ANON - lilith on January 24, 2006
    Be proud of your flames, its a cold winter this year ;-) Anyway, if some idiots think they need to flame this story, they should at least get their facts straight, because the International Statute of Wizarding Secrecy went into effect 1692 - meaning the wizarding and the muggle split long before your story takes place - making it perfectly believable that the wizarding wold might be quite diffrent from the muggle world. Hey, they still used whipping as a punishment when Arthur Weasley attended Hogwarts, and that was 20th century! That much about that.
    I think you managed to keep them both as much in character as it is possible in this setting, and you are the first. There was only one story with Severus as submissive I read that managed that, and that was "Wrapped around her fingers", with Hermione as dom. I hope you can keep it up, because I know it is not easy, and it's one reason why I enjoy your story very much. Perhaps you should describe a bit more why Severus is submitting so easily - I know you already did that, but peoples memory is short. Also, Harrys enjoyment of controlling Severus is very human... can you tell us a bit more about their relationship before they were thrown back in time? Did Severus kill Dumbledore? Why did they work together?
    I guess Wulfrics slave tattled about Severus having magic. I hope you update soon!
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  • From on January 24, 2006
    That reviewer was clearly an idiot--I'm from the Uk & to be honest I wouldnt have given a damn either way--wether this was an AU or not--fanfiction this good shouldnt be limited ^_^

    The only thing I would object to so far is the shower--er, 19th centuary showering? I think not. Otherwise ^_^ brilliant. I hope you update again soon!
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  • From BurneHazard on January 24, 2006
    Hey Taran. I had been holding off on reviewing this fic for a while because in truth, I didn't think my views would be of any help to you. However, in light of what happened, I would like to say that I certainly am enjoying this story. Don't let people get to you. After all, you never stated that it would be historically accurate, thus why it is AU, where ANYTHING can and likely WILL happen. But as others have said as much, I'll move on.

    I was also one wondering about the shower, but hey, wizards...magic...ring a bell? Who's to say that wizards didn't invent showers before muggles got indoor plumbing? You really do know how to keep me on the edge of my seat however with the suggestion that Severus being a slave with magic might...mean something disasterous? And what of Wulfric's slave? Or Lucius' ancestor--that's the thing that's really gripping me.

    I am one that would love you to update and update FAST but take your time. Personally, this story is worth the wait. Just be sure to keep writing as YOU want, it is YOUR story after all, we're only reading it because we love to. Anyone else can take a flying leap into the nearest lake. Keep it up, all right? I'll check back again later, and rather frequently too.
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  • From ANON - dark_samira on January 24, 2006
    I was so waiting for an update that when I saw it i jumped happily like a little Dobby!!!
    The more I read it the more I like it! And seeing I liked it from the beginning it says much! ;P
    I just fear the fact that probably it would take a while and some more chapters to get to the hot part, but it fits! sob!

    As for that horrible review you got, I can't really see how what it says should matter in this contest, even if all of it was true (maybe I'm just ignorant but I never heard about a coordination of wizarding and muggle laws), this is a fanfic!
    Fantasy is involved!

    But then I got this bad feeling that maybe you could have taken my observation about the shower, as a similar reprimand, and I felt so bad!!!
    As I said it was just a silly clarification, just something that I noted, and.... ok I confess... I noted it just because I was thinking something along the line of:

    Harry: "Sev? you'd better join me before the water turns hot!"
    (No they can't heat it with magic! where would be the fun in that?)
    Sev: "Master....I don't think...."
    Harry: "JOIN ME!"
    Sev: "I won't..."
    *collar tightening*
    *sev accomplishing the command*
    Flustered Harry: "I m-meant in the tub!"

    ;PPP
    oooops, sorry! got carried away!!!
    this is YOUR story!



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  • From ANON - Barbara on January 24, 2006
    Thanks for the update, I will take them when I can.
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  • From ANON - Ginger on January 24, 2006
    Thanks for updating!!! And don
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  • From ANON - sevs_lil_secret on January 24, 2006
    Taran, I love this story. I write as well, and generally only write AU. Don't let that twatwaffle's comment bug you. I have seen some stuff that has made me want to write the author and ask them to share their drugs. I am not going to go on about that ijit though, they can simply read elsewhere.

    As for updating quickly....do it when you can. I have arthritis that keeps me from using my hands much of the time, so since the weather's gotten cold my readers have gone from once a day postings to once every 7-10 days. We adapt, and if you have us hooked, we will wait with baited breath for the next morsel.

    All that being said...keep up the lovely work when you can and don't let the twatwaffles ruin your day.
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  • From ANON - merd on January 24, 2006
    hey where severus's shoes ????? >:(

    joking joking

    I like the variant of characters you made ..... almost real and close to book
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