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Reviews for Hogsmeade, Circa 1826

By : TaranSwann
  • From ANON - smilingcat on January 24, 2006
    I've just discoverd yous story and think it's really, really good! I really like Dom Harry and Sub Sev, and there are so little stories!! Please update soon!!

    Love, Smilingcat
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 24, 2006
    Cliffie!!!!
    What a place to stop!!!!!
    Sounds interesting. What are they going to see in the bar????
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  • From ANON - Jaima on January 24, 2006
    Well, I like all your stories mistakes or not! Some were just born to be assholes, usually covering their own faults! Constructive critics are ok but flames are just cowards.
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  • From ANON - RecluseSnark on January 24, 2006
    Don't let the oft' huffy/picky readers get you down, dear-heart. Fanfiction is meant to be taken with a grain of salt, and anyone with the audacity to criticize so harshly should be equally prepared to present their own work up for the scrutiny of their "peers". Let's not forget that "constructive criticism" is meant to encourage and help the author/artist. Flaming and bashing is both horridly rude and disappointingly juvenile.

    I, for one, enjoy the challenging AU you've set out to create, and admire your tenacity in pursuing such a difficult plot. If the characters are a bit OOC, it is only something that can be improved with time and practice.

    Don't even bother with the words of one so willing to hurt rather than help, for they are worthless. I do hope your health improves, and the empty grumblings of the uptight sticklers bother you no longer.
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  • From ANON - Miko Kage on January 23, 2006
    Great story, I tend to avoid master/slave ficts because I am not a big fan of angst, however this one is to funny! Snape complaining about wearing red is a great touch, write more soon!
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  • From ANON - merd on January 22, 2006
    wooow
    very interesting idea :)

    o And I very interesting to see how poor Albus will be suppressed by his lemon drops if him to tell what his father with Sev has maked

    :) lol :)
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  • From ANON - :) on January 20, 2006
    very interesting is Voldy dead olredy and this happend on his death

    or he still a life and done it for snap out from HP and SS ???


    (I mean send them in time)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
    Omg this story is so cool! And you take do so many things with it! I hope Dumbledore finds out about Harry and that leads him to free the slaves. I hope I didn
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 17, 2006
    sorry, had to review again after I read Astas comment. You being north american or slavery being abolished at 1826 in europe, is inconsequensal to this fic and it's plot. It's just a year and who say's muggle and wizarding law go hand in hand? If your going technical over it, wizards are still using slavery but with house elfs. So your story line is very probable. I hope you don't take Astas comment to heart and rewrite the story or anything. This is a slave fic and a readlly good one at that. Keep it so :-)
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 17, 2006
    this was a delightful read :-) I giggled right from chatper 1 until the last chapter you have writen. truly delightful.
    I have no idea how I could have missed this fic for as long as I have.
    I hope you update regularly.
    thank you for the great read.
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  • From ANON - Ravynsword on January 17, 2006
    Please tell me you are going to continue this!!! The concept you've posited has me intrigued and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on January 17, 2006
    I'm thankful that some of the toys are for Severus' pleasure too. I just hope that they have to show the Master/Slave relationship fairly soon.

    Excellent chapter!

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Ginger on January 17, 2006
    Really a very nice story!!! It
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  • From ANON - dark_samira on January 17, 2006
    Interesting and original plot!

    I hope you'll update soon!

    Just a thing: in chapter 5 you write about Sev having a shower, if I'm not wrong, but isn't a shower improbable for the years the story is set?
    Wouldn't be more appropriate a bath?
    I know it's a stupid issue, I just had to ask!
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_lover on January 16, 2006
    loved your story ^__^
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