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  • From ANON - Mr. Moosey on January 19, 2006
    Just like Snape can't hardly wait for his detention with Miss Granger, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good job. I adore Evil!Snape, and I DO think that he would dance over her dead body when she died. I just really hope that you don't end this fic with him some how falling in love with her. THAT WOULD RUIN EVERYTHING! After all, what good is the mudblood Granger, but a Gryffindor Whore? *Smirk* Update. Soon.
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  • From ANON - Donna on January 18, 2006
    I'm always in favor of a mixed Snape.
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  • From on January 18, 2006
    YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT AT HIM LOOKING FORWARD TO DETENTION!? I LOVE THIS STORY! I MUST HAVE MORE! Please?
    angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com
    Please and Thank you,
    Alexandra17
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 18, 2006
    septentrion 2006-01-18 id # 2035603937
    ch 5 : what about a good Severus with bad tendencies f or next chapter ?

    I agree with septentrion on this one. As long he is not a total bad snape, i like bad snape, but into anything really really dark. But either way i like snape . But i would like to see him having a little fun with her frist before ..a little game of cat and mouse?..i say make a little good and evil snape in the mix.
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  • From Applekissis on January 18, 2006
    Great story and chapter...well the first three were pretty boring,not much going on,but 4 and 5 were really good and i cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - septentrion on January 18, 2006
    ch 5 : what about a good Severus with bad tendencies f or next chapter ?
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  • From ANON - anya on January 18, 2006
    Well written and intriguing.
    I must say:
    Good Severus! Good Severus! Please!


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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on January 18, 2006
    Oh wow the plot is coming together very nicely. Hmmmm...personally I like a Bad Snape with a little side of good Snape thrown in, but thats just me I suppose. *Grins* Keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 18, 2006
    Doing good so far i have to say , and leaving more questions , what is going on? Hope you update.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on January 18, 2006
    The plot thickens, wonder why Snape kept staring at her like that? And what is Draco really up to? What has Hermione figured out? lol Sorry I'm rambling a bit. Excellent chapter, I can't til you update again.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 17, 2006
    Good chapter (3), I enjoyed it. Chapters can always be longer, but that chapter was long enough. Again, I loved the chapter.
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  • From ANON - k on January 17, 2006
    update plz
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on January 17, 2006
    Draco is a bit of a ass isn't he. *shakes head* Glad Hermione knocked him on his ass, he asked for after the day she had. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 17, 2006
    many questions.. Very good 3rd chapter..man he is a ass alright but i love snape anyway lol.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 17, 2006
    The idea of the story sounds good. I've noticed you continue to repeat what happened especially in the second chapter; first from Hermione's point of view and then from Ron's. It was, more or less, listening to the story twice, the chapter is short so when you tell the story twice in a short chapter there isn't much in it. So two things: longer chapters, and don't put in uneccessary paragraphs; for example when you explained why Ron checked on Hermione, you also repeated most of what happened in the exchange which resulted in taking up half the chapter. You could of covered that in a couple of sentences and furthered the story a bit more, such as going back to Hermione or if Ron has a big part in the story, then continuing on with him. I'm not trying to be overly critical, but I think it would help you improve as a writer and make the story more interesting for readers. Good luck witht the next chapter :)
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