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By : SchtzFrytls
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 22, 2006
    Harry cast a bubble? Is it only to protect the baby or will it keep Voldemort from him as well? Neec chapter 10!!!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 22, 2006
    Oh no, they've got to stop Voldie's plan!
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  • From ANON - KitKat on January 21, 2006
    love it love it, it is surprisingly original in its own sense, i love how they went totaaly punk, but u cant kill her!i love the new her SOOO much
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 21, 2006
    Must be wishful thinking. Can I have chapter 9 first?
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  • From ANON - poopsie on January 21, 2006
    I want Hermione to live--the 4 of them are really powerful together....so....

    Or maybe her and Layla could perform some kind of bonding magic where she takes part of the sickness into herself and because it's split, it is at a level where it won't kill them....I don't know.....
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 21, 2006
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Nicole on January 21, 2006
    Alas, another great update. Now onto the questions!!



    1. I like Alexis and Preston

    2. KILL OLD DUMBLEFUCK!!

    3. Hmm... Well you can have Hermione and Layla make love. And right before they climax they both say I love you while looking into each other's eyes. Then a brilliant light can encompass both of them. And you can then say that they were soul mates and because of how pure their love was the elements decided to bless them with Hermione's healing........Or something like that *grin*


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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 21, 2006
    Who went to Rita? What did they tell her? Oh I need chapter 10! What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Angelica Faerie on January 21, 2006
    Love the story so far. It's a great idea. You asked some questions in the Author's Note chapter. I don't really feel like giving any name ideas, but for the killing off part, I think that might be a little obvious. Voldemort and Dumbledore definitely, and maybe Ron if it can be arranged. Also, for the Hermione cure, if you can figure out a way to bind the four of them together to better use their powers, the combined power could flush out her system so to speak and get rid of the cancer. Well, that's about it for now accept to beg you to update more quickly. I love the storyline.

    Angelica Faerie
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  • From WynterRose on January 21, 2006
    awwww, love the group effort! that led me to a way to "heal" hermione. being a practicing witch myself, I tried something similar. For all intents and purposes it worked. My mom got a bit worse, bad enough to go to the hospital. The trip to the hospital ended up with a procedure that helped her in the last months of her life. It didn't actually save her life, BUT it helped her to have a better last few months than she would have had.

    (this is why I was upset when you mentioned cancer, it is still touchy with me)

    anyway, the four can do a spell or the other three can do a spell while all four are practicing and they send her healing energy from the extra elements, something her body could possibly have been lacking. or they can force the sickness out of her cells and into Albus' cells at some point, having learned they can take specific matter from one thing and place it specifically back in the same position.

    (if any of this is confusing or sounds good, go on and email me I can explain what I did in more detail, etc.)
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  • From ANON - lora on January 20, 2006
    seeing as this story is not finished, i get to comment. yay!!! so, dumbledore is evil, huh? he should die a slow and painful death in a face-off with harry. hermione needs to get better. some stray hex could cure her? a reverse of the avada kadevera? and lastly, i want some action from harry and draco.
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  • From ANON - Mya Malfoy on January 20, 2006
    I love this story! You've got me completely addicted. Here are the answers you were asking for:

    1. I still need names, What are your favorite male and female names?
    A: Male: Andrew or Jacob (even Jake for short!); Female: Elizabeth, Drucilla or Lily (depending on who it's for!).

    2. Who do you want to see killed off?
    A: Moldy Voldy, of course! Anyone who gets in our wizards/witches way, and, as dead last, Ron (he's too much fun to fuck with, usually, to kill him off outright!).

    3. If I were to keep Hermione around....How do you think her recovery could be explained?
    A: Have her bond to Layla and have it be an aftereffect of the bond. When they kill Voldy, have a huge amount of energy rush through her body and eradicate it, or even better, have Severus find a cure!!!

    Those are all the ideas I can think of for right now... hope I helped!!!

    Mya
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  • From ANON - Storm on January 20, 2006
    Great story. I like it. Hmm along the lines of keeping Hermione, her recovery could have something to do with the four elements coming together and completing and bonding the four, healing her in the process. anyway great job and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on January 20, 2006
    please update soon...I really do love this fic ^.~
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on January 20, 2006
    I really want Hermione to stay around, I suppose you could always make it that they all kill Voldemort and in doing so releasing Voldemorts power, giving it to the four and curing Hermione. I dunno about names...except I always loved the names Kovu(male) and Vitani(female). I don't care how you do it but PLEASE keep Hermione alive!!
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