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By : SchtzFrytls
  • From ANON - Alison on January 20, 2006
    Soul Mates! Perfect! =o) Now... about Hermione's cancer problem...... ;o)

    Great chapter! Please udpate soon! =o)
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  • From ANON - chrisi on January 20, 2006
    well its interesting so far and i love a bad harry and hermione as much as the next but i havent yet understood why they changed and i say u have awsome choice in clothing and music, ok well harry has awsome taste in music, rob zombies dragula is one of my faves. i want the collar harry has, id wear it instead of the black dog collar i have thast has a tag with spoilt inscribed in it.
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 20, 2006
    good chapters, bye
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  • From ANON - Nicole on January 20, 2006
    Great updates. Are Layla and Hermione soul mates? I mean it would make sense since they make up the other half of the elements AND it would be the perfect excuse to miraculously heal Hermione....::cough:: lol. And James and Sev? Who knew?
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 20, 2006
    The whole Herm's and Harry go Slytheryn is over done. That being said it is one of my favorite plot bunnies and yours is execellent. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing it with us,
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 20, 2006
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 8! Does it turn red? Bond as in have sex or bond as in the ceremony/ritual?
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 19, 2006
    oh sweets, another lovely chapter!! I love the pink fluffy ness (shudders, really I hate pink, but that was just soo....)

    ANYWAY, with the formatting, what I end up doing when the screen acts like that is copy and pasting it into word. Then I can scroll down regularly.
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  • From ANON - scully on January 19, 2006
    wow, i just read and reviewed and instantly there was another chapter up! how cool is that???
    im glad hermione finally told layla.
    and i am super glad that harry and draco are going to have sex! i hope we get lots of juicy details in the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - scully on January 19, 2006
    whoo-hoo! FINALLY! a kiss!
    and james is alive? sev is harry's other father? wow! what a shocker! didn't expect that one at all! man, i think DD is in big trouble now.
    loved the chapter, now i want more! more harry and draco, please! :)
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  • From ANON - Athena on January 19, 2006
    OK! I am really confused. When I clicked on this story to read it, there were 5/6 chapters., I finished ch. 1 and ch. 2 was replaced with an authors note. I refreshed ch. 1 and now even the A.N. is gone? Did you do something or is my computer being really weird?
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 19, 2006
    ok...you are scaring me...where did the rest of it go???
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 19, 2006
    i'm thinking that you need to have dear old tom turn dumbledore in to try and get some amnesty from harry, only harry quickly pulls both of their hearts out and stomps on them and since they don't really have a heart, give them the traitor's death!!


    *sits back down calmly* really, I'm not out for blood...yeah...really.
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  • From ANON - Jess on January 19, 2006
    This is a really cool story glad I found it.

    As for Dumbledor, Have his magic striped and him sent to an insane asaylam (like one of the really bad ones) or Tajuana Jail (rated the worst jail in to world)

    Is it Dumbledor Voldamort is working for?

    Guys names Deamon, Lestat, Leonardo, and Julius (I can't spell)
    Girls names Rosalin, Jasmen, Heather, and Gianna
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  • From ANON - Rose on January 19, 2006
    Ohh.. kill him... ... have monkies cut off his boobs! X_X KILL DUMBLEWRINKLYASS!!!
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  • From ANON - moi on January 19, 2006
    wow! definately did not expect the twist of hermione having cancer. sad, really, that the smartest witch at hogwarts is dying because the world lacks the knowledge to find a cure for her disease. but you've written her character wonderfully, and i'm glad that you made her this way, since usually i despise her.
    as for your plea for the dumbledore suggestion...i know this is really unrealistic, and would probably never ever happen in the HP universe, but i think that you should have them secretly bind dumbledore's magic and send him to be a muggle slave- like in a third world country or something. then they should tell the daily prophet that he was killed doing something incredibly stupid and embarassing. it would be incredibly ironic (first, beacuse dumbledore is supposedly one of the strongest wizards alive, and having his power sucked out from him is ironic, but also because he's a manipulative bastard and seems to make everyone else bend to his will- so if he were to become a slave, it would completely reverse the power pyramid). wow. i think that was one great big run-on sentence. O_o. oh well. *shrugs* anyway, i think that idea is a little far-fethced, but that's my suggestion.
    ~moi
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