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Reviews for FIRE DANCING

By : nixwilliams
  • From nixwilliams on January 21, 2006
    woah! "boys, boys, boys" as manny from black books might say. let's cool it down, huh?

    girl_, i'm glad you understand the "drabble" aspect of a drabble (a lot of people don't seem to), i.e. that it is a very short, usually 100w, piece. as such the writer can choose either to skip the details and tell a whole story in the cliched "broad brush strokes," or can pick out one moment and try to tell a story through the minutae. i find that the best drabbles stick in your mind, and you want to read them again. hopefully some of mine do that for the readers here!

    tom, the only reason i'm not removing your reviews is that i find them rather amusing, and i can't quite tell if you're being serious. please play nice with other reviewers, if not with me. (that goes for all of you!)
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  • From ANON - Tom on January 21, 2006
    At least I can spell vegetarian, my dear girl_anachronism. So butt out of what I do or don't read thankyouverymuch. *hmph*
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    ..that was a bit confusing but I think I get it...
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    It's great, but maybe just a little confusing
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  • From ANON - Tom on January 20, 2006
    Greg can frikkin' die for all I care. And maybe he is dead. I'd surely be the last to know. I'm not privy to that kind of information, the bastard. So don't write me anything to do with that tosser or I'll come at you like a nun sandwich. You could write something about pirates ... you know, if you wanted.
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  • From nixwilliams on January 20, 2006
    ah, tom. tom, tom, tom. not getting any action from greg yet, i take it? shall i write you some?
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  • From ANON - Tom on January 20, 2006
    I don't know why AFF don't strike you off the list. I think I might report you. What is this rated - PG or something????!!!1!??!*%^#$ And why is it so short? I know you can write hoter stuff than this, despite all the fire references. Where is the sex? What are you afraid of? I bet you're a vegetarian or something.
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  • From nixwilliams on January 20, 2006
    loquacious.. that's you, nabootheenigma... i'm naboo, that's who, get in my hoover bag you boo!!! i have a request: a bob fossil/draco malfoy crossover. of course after you finish my tumnus/pippin fic! also thanks james, i'm glad you like the drabble action.
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  • From ANON - nabootheenigma on January 20, 2006
    Oh yes, this is more like it. Mmmmmmmm, lesbians. (Sorry, that was a bit Homer Simpson-esque.) Again, very nice images. I like it. Hermione coming in from the cold of experimental heterosexuality into the fires of hot lesbian lovin' with the slut king lesbian lover extraordinaire, Ginny. Not that Harry *isn't* hot, of course, but just with the right people *cough*draco*cough*. Excuse me. Good work team. More I say. You don't write enough of the lesbian stuff. You should embrace the fire that I know burrrrrrrrrrns inside you. Let it out. Burrrrrrrrrrrrrn up the internet nixy baby.
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  • From ANON - james on January 20, 2006
    you get alot into the 100 words, like hints of the whole relationship with ginny and mione, and it still works by itself, even if its a sequel.
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