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Reviews for Isolation

By : RediF
  • From ANON - Heather on January 28, 2006
    Ohhhh you know in all the "musings" of what and how Harry will be when everything is all said and done this possiblity is always the hardest to read. But it is written so nicely. Hopefully this Harry will find his peace at last
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  • From ANON - Sivy on January 21, 2006
    I hope this isn't just a one-shot, I would like to see the reaction of everyone if he does go through with it successfully. Its an interesting start out. Hope to hear from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Pam on January 21, 2006
    Not too bad... but you ought to try to include more details and more angst. This is way too short for any real emotion to show. Put more detail, more feeling into it, and way more description (like why would ron and herm not include him? did their parents die because of him? or some other reason... remember, ron and hermione are in the war together with harry... did harry make a mistake that caused the death of somebody ron and hermione cared about? the death of ginny? or another weasley?), and why not include how he bought the vial, his feelings when buying the vial, the emptiness, the never ending sorrow etc.

    You have the potential to be a good author, just keep practicing. e-mail me at IcePrincess89@gmail.com if you need any other pointers on any other stories.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    flame? how could anyone flame this. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    awww that was very sad and well written u definatly have talent when it comes to writing.
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  • From ANON - paige on January 20, 2006
    You could have him come back and haunt Hermione and Ron.
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  • From Narius on January 20, 2006
    Please don't let this be a oneshot. It doesn't even have to be a romance fic, just one more chapter. Please?
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  • From ANON - MudBlood Malfoy on January 20, 2006
    Wow that was really great you could really feel his pain and sorrow. Your story really reminds me of when I as depressed and suicidal it chills me a bit but it's beautiful in many ways
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