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Reviews for It's just a book

By : QueenRuby
  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on January 24, 2006
    Well, its your story, and you are free to make the characters any way you like. Having said that, out of the trio, Hermione is the most apt to think outside the box. So she would be more inclined to not believe what happened and perhaps think there was more to it than meets the eye with Snape killing Dumbledore. At the end of HBP, she had already found out something about Snape and tried to tell Harry, only to be promptly ignored.
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  • From ANON - Statues on January 24, 2006
    ooh, this is going to be good, I can tell. Feel the Sev/Herm passion...gorgeous!
    One thing though; a tiny point I know, but one that irks me somewhat (sorry! I'm the teensiest bit pedantic when it comes to this) In England it's mum, not mom.
    Other than that, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Miladymegan on January 24, 2006
    Hey, not bad. I myself love romance novels and always put myself in the lead characters part. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep 'em coming.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2006
    Ch 1-2: interesting start, good dialogue, I like the verbal sparring. I like the idea that Snape has help (Hagrid) taking care of an ill Dumbledore and that they pulled off a mock death. Can you tell me, however, how does Snape get pulled into the book? Thanks for your story. Tiny grammer suggestion: double check use of "your" "you're" "there" they're" :-)
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  • From ANON - Denise on January 23, 2006
    chp 1-2: I really like the story idea, and teh way you are writing it! its hard to believe that it is your first HG/SS....everyone seems so in character. well as of now, no criticism to give...lol...im jsut waiting for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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