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By : Jemixe
  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 08, 2008
    Oh wow that was extremely hot
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  • From mikaela717 on December 08, 2007
    OHHHHHHHHHH that was suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper HOT!!!!! YUMM YUMM!! *drools*
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  • From ssjrice on August 30, 2007
    SEQUEL...... PLEEEEEAAASEEE
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  • From darkvineyard on July 21, 2007
    I freaking love this oneshot! I've read it before, and I like to keep reading it again! This is the only fanfic I've read with a Harry/Severus/Lucius pairing. Do you know any other fanfics with that pairing? Please let me know, I really can't find any.
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  • From darkvineyard on April 09, 2007
    That story was freakin awesome! You're very good at writing. I hope you write a sequel.

    x dark vineyard
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2007
    aw man...i hope you can find a squel or two in you cause that was f*ckin wonderful...you know your a GREAT writer
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  • From ANON - Wolfie on October 07, 2006
    Well, I don't really think Harry should have been double penetrated when he was a virgin, but over all it was a good story. I personally would re-write part of it to make a second chapter and put the double penetration for several months after they started having sex.

    Anal sex can be painful with just one penetrating you until you are used to it, two when you haven't even been broken in is worse I am sure. Nice sex scene all around, if you hadn't put Harry as a virgin, it might not have felt a little "wrong" in the physical sense.

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  • From ANON - mphoenix on February 06, 2006
    very tastly.... very hott
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  • From ANON - Midnight Fairy on January 30, 2006
    please let there be more
    you have to write more!!!!
    this was HOT!
    loved it and if there is not another cahpter please do a sequal
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  • From ANON - sethian on January 27, 2006
    2 cocks..is too much IMO
    :( not really possible..if it is..it must be dangerous at some point.

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  • From ANON - amber on January 26, 2006
    that was one of the hottest fics I have ever read!!!
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  • From ANON - Eirenei on January 26, 2006
    good.

    Your writing is so hot that could be used instead of sun. Please write a sequel, maybe how were the two naughty Death Suckers ''cum'' to that bet, and their feelings at Harry's shock at their admission.

    What about reaction of Harry's friends, Draco, Ginny?

    See ya soon,

    Eirenei
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  • From Chandrima on January 25, 2006
    sweet jesus dancing on jellyied toast... i think i need to take a long, long, long... cold shower. excuse me.
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on January 25, 2006
    you should make another chapter or a sequel.. BETTER YET! MAKE IT A STORY. I WOULD READ IT!
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  • From ANON - Lilliputian722 on January 25, 2006
    Awesome story.....the chemistry was hot!
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