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Reviews for Kiss The Serpent

By : indigonightowl
  • From Jak3811 on April 14, 2012
    I really have enjoyed this!
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  • From ChaosLady on April 12, 2012
    The whole process sounds gross. Great update!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on April 12, 2012
    Oh noes. Poor Harry. The story, however is super awesome!
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  • From wannabewolfe on April 12, 2012
    I am really enjoying this so far and even have an idea of who the prophecy could be referring to. Only time will tell if I am correct or not. :)
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  • From Miss_Maurer on April 12, 2012
    I love this story. I love everything about this story. From the whole Sev staying a virgin because Voldemort needed him to for a potion, to the scenes with Hermione. I can't wait to read more. Favorite story in a long time.
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  • From moodysavage on April 11, 2012
    that's because I luuuuuvvvv this story... so of COURSE you will be finishing... it would be a crime not to! :)
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  • From Haggishunter on April 11, 2012
    wasn't as fond of this chapter. The content is fine but it felt very disjointed. Just when I got into the flow of one part it would jump and i'd have to refind the flow only for it to happen again. The Draco/Harry scene felt rushed, though I liked that Pansy turned up. Not sure what to make of the last part with the alchemy. Again the content was good but I felt that he was talking more to another professor rather than Hermione. Even though she is clever it would have made more sense to me for him to dumb down what he was saying to make sure that she could follow what was being described and be able to give thoughtful input about it also the connection was missing between them in the last part. His eureka moment should have had more impact when he discovered that the snake was the key. Even grabbing Hermione and kissing her in the spur of the moment before lowering his eyes again and continuing while pointing to the passage would have given the connection some oomph. To me the little things like quick glances or watching him speak or the eureka were missing. I think if the flow was smoother it may not have been so noticeable but perhaps that is just me.

    I hope we get more Draco/Harry turmoil with how the kiss ended. Look forward to seeing what comes next.
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  • From CraftMage on April 08, 2012
    *SQUEE* oh my god that update was amazing. Love it! And waiting with baited breath for the next one.
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  • From ChaosLady on April 08, 2012
    I hope this story does not end here! I want more Snape and Hermione goodness!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 08, 2012
    Maybe this will be the impetus he needs to tell her that he wants things to be a bit more permanent. Her love and bravery can only take them so far. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From anyesha on April 08, 2012
    need more of this story please...............................
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on April 07, 2012
    i love the growing feelings between Severus and Hermione!! you are a very good writing thank you for the update and i'm impatiently awaiting the next.
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  • From Madamdragon on April 07, 2012
    I am glad that was a dodged bullet. I hope they share their feelings soon. Hope more is to come soon.
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  • From Haggishunter on April 07, 2012
    ohhh i have my suspicions of who the prophecy is about :)
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  • From duckducknbear on April 07, 2012
    Phew! Close call that was! Poor Hermione...so very stressed about loving Sev. Good chapter...I look forward to the next one at his return!
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