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Reviews for Kiss The Serpent

By : indigonightowl
  • From pinkmoontribe on March 22, 2012
    Firstly didnt even know u were a mom but that makes u even more awesome! Secondly thanks so much for this update. Wow i needed it. It was hot and beautiful. I love snapes vulnerable side. And hermiones gentle courage. Im so glad she said "next time" it warmed my heart :) i cant wait for the next morning after. Also i enjoy the harry draco part too" nice tie in. Please keep updates coming ur story is brilliant and my favorite!!! Id love a bubble bath scene!!!!please
    Sassy p
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  • From anyesha on March 22, 2012
    wonderfull delicious .......its amazzingggggg..
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  • From DawnEB on March 22, 2012
    Oh, I love the way you got them to work it out together, how each of them gains confidence with the other. Now I shall wait eagerly to see how things work out the next morning!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on March 21, 2012
    Love love love this story! Very creative and very interesting, with Hermione having to really go it on her own. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter, although I am already cringing for her!
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  • From Snapeswhore on March 20, 2012
    Oh and I apologize in advance for my review and American spelling of "humor". sorry.
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  • From Snapeswhore on March 20, 2012
    I really love your story so far. Just a quick random thought...I was just on fanfiction.net and because they seem to get more new stories and I was backreading old ones. I was amazed at how childish (of course as it's for under 18) they were. The sense of humor is that of my 13 year sister. So here I wandered on not thinking anything new would be up and luckily there was your story. Now normally I'm all for a mature "worldly" Snape but I figured I'd give it a shot and I'm so glad I did. First off, I was so impressed with the humor you gave Snape. It was fitting for his character perfectly. It wasn't childish and nor was a passive simpleton just because he's a virgin. Brava!! I am only up to Chapter "Monday" but I am of course continuing I just couldn't wait to add my 2 cents. The teacup part......now THAT was funny. I could actually see them saying things like that. Good Job for keeping in character while exploring a not often explored territory (virgin Snape), for humor befitting the actual character, and maturity of writing style.
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  • From ChaosLady on March 20, 2012
    Poor Hermione!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 20, 2012
    If that darn taciturn man would just learn to speak his mind, this would go a whole lot smoother for both of them! ARGH!!! For such a thick-headed person, he's incredibly thin-skinned. And, making their first time an unmitigated disaster is certainly no way to get started on their way. Sigh... This poor couple has A LONG way to go. But, I am glad Molly, Arthur and Bill at least tried to be supportive of her. And, regardless of their feelings, at least Harry and Ron showed up. That's something at least. Man, I hope he lets his guard down at least a little, so that they can both try to enjoy some of their wedding night. Fingers crossed for a miracle! Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From SSHGSHIPER on March 20, 2012
    yay cant wait to read more
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  • From Tinkerbelletje on March 20, 2012
    Ok, you are one of my favorite authors now!! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY!! Keep up the work.. and pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase I beg you... update soon!!
    Hugs and kisses from a Belgian fan! :)
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  • From Madamdragon on March 20, 2012
    I am really liking this. I'm starting to get into Sev/mione fics. HOpe you update again soon. I am anxious to see what will happen
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  • From pinkmoontribe on March 20, 2012
    *sneers* you left me hanging like that? Ive practically got blue balls....if i had balls....blue boobs? Meh im happy u updated. Cant wait for the next chapter. Please give it to me quick. I hope their love making surprises them! Like that night when hermione was on his lap!!! I still cant get that scene outta my head. Please update more!!! And get on ur msn messenger girl!!! So i can harasse and push u there lol xoxo sassy p
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 20, 2012
    OH COME ON!!!!! cliffhanger and a half!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON loveing this story!!
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  • From anyesha on March 20, 2012
    plsssssssss plssssssssss dont' stop writting its wonderfull!!! when am i going to get the full story......... you are wonderfull!!!!cant' wait cant' wait!!!! please finish the story
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  • From anyesha on March 17, 2012
    dear author nightowl...plz plz plz complete ths story i am almost dying to see the wedding night of hermione and severus.......... i just love severus in your story so plz plz plz complete ittttt
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