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Reviews for Kiss The Serpent

By : indigonightowl
  • From pinkmoontribe on March 15, 2012
    I am miserable without an update. Even that one scene between them when hermione crawled on his lap was hotter than my wedding night. No lie. Im possessed by this story its all i ever think about. Oh how i want severus to give into his passion for the girl. To leave her mindless lol
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  • From moodysavage on March 14, 2012
    I'm so in love with this story. It's just wonderful to read. I'm GLAD that they now have to be open about their engagement. I think they are so perfect for each other. I don't normally read many Snape stories because of the age difference but he is my favorite character and I love how you have written him.

    Now you have asked about a beta for this story and I hate the thought that you won't post new chapters because you are waiting to have a beta check them! I personally don't think your story needs one but I know it makes an author feel more secure if someone looks it over. You don't have many errors that distract from your story and I love the way your story has progressed.

    I do beta for several Naruto-verse authors (and if they are reading this where are your new chapters! :(
    and RL during the school year is suckily busy... but this story is too awesome to wait lol.

    So if you don't have a beta for this story feel free to drop me a line. I'm moodysavage@yahoo.com :)
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  • From anyesha on March 14, 2012
    please write the whole story its really gr8 this story
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  • From KisaKnox on March 13, 2012
    Ahhhh, this was a wonderful read. Thanks for updating it! I can't wait to see what you've got going on for it (not even ending-specific, just as a whole!). :3
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  • From abbycolao on March 13, 2012
    still awesome
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  • From anyesha on March 13, 2012
    can't wait for the next part please please write the whole story its thrilling and gripping my heart ...........amazingggggggg
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  • From pinkmoontribe on March 13, 2012
    Thank u so much for this update. Please dont let this story die. You must finish it. Youve given a unique stroke of life and romance to HG and SS and u need to see it through....for them. You dont even have to do a giant battle scene with voldemort. U can sum it up in one chapter and get back to their growing romance and feelings.

    My heart melted when hermione picked out those rings. Now i want to exhange my diamond bank and make my husband and i get matching ones like that. I see u have messenger. Im gonna dowload it on my phone and add u. So if theres and inspiration or moral support i can give u...im there. Besides im pregnant and due in a month. Im going to go on vacation soon and will have nothing to do but worry about HG and SS....your wonderful and brilliant...ur writing brings things to life! Please keep it coming. Also best steamy scenes ever. Because its tasteful and believe able.
    Pammy
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 13, 2012
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HURRY UP!!!!!!! lol
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  • From ChaosLady on March 13, 2012
    Uh oh. This chapter was all sorts of trouble! There is one thing, plot-wise wrong with things, considering Snape is a double agent and Lucius supposedly under the imperious during the last war, they would never discuss the "Dark Lord" in public. If they do, the code would have to be better than that. Other than that, it was a great chapter.
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  • From pinkmoontribe on March 12, 2012
    This is my fav story ever. My fav version of sev ever. Please finish give me more. Ur amazing
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  • From Sashi on March 12, 2012
    This is so sweet! I love how you manage to keep Snape in character while making him this akward and innocent virgin. I just can't tell you how much I love this idea, this story and these characters. It was my first Snape/Hermione fanfic, but I liked it so much I went looking for others while I wait for an update, and I still haven't found one that I like this much.
    Update soon, please!
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  • From bournespeed on March 12, 2012
    Great story, I love how Hermione is breaking through Severus' barriers and letting him feel wanted. Can't wait for more.
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  • From moodysavage on March 11, 2012
    dang they are sexy together... they could totally melt down in that room
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  • From moodysavage on March 11, 2012
    that chapter 8 was just beautifully special to read...wow
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 11, 2012
    Im not normally into HG/SS but this fic captured my attention from the start. Im extremely glad that you decided to finish this fic. I really cant wait for the next group! This is going to be one of the few fics on here that I really look forward to see being updated :) please keep up the good work!
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