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Reviews for Kiss The Serpent

By : indigonightowl
  • From ANON - Vivian Fluff on September 04, 2006
    Please please please write more to your story soon, I'm just dying to know what happens next! I love that Snape is so insecure in his relations with Hermione, and equally so, I like how Hermione is agressive in her showing of affections; even if it is unwittingly due to her lack of emotional control. After all, the professor is supposed to be seduceing her, not the other way around. Wouldn't that take some effort on his part?
    I would also like to make a suggestion, and like all suggestions, you can tell me to go shove it where the sun don't shine, but I'll give it anyways. I think that Hermione needs to take Severus' lack of action to the headmaster and take him to task about it. I woiuld also very much like to see a scene where Hermione makes Severus so angry/frustrated that he intimidates/shoves her up against a deserted, darkened hallway to "show her what she's messing with". And of course, Hermione being the daring young woman we all love, turns the situation into one hell of a "memory building" experiance; nothing too raunchy, just some good teasing really. As I said, you can tell me to go stick it if you like, but I thought I'd just get that off my chest.
    Anyways, thankyou for listening to my rantings about your (in my opinion) superb piece of penmenship. I look forward to reading the next installment of "kiss the Serpent" and I wish you luck. I would also tell you that my E-mail is currently having difficulties, so I may not read your responce or reply for a while but I will try.
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  • From ANON - DarkAria on August 24, 2006
    Please update! I've been waiting for months... I know you've probably have a thousand other things to do but I NEED to know how the story ends. PLEASE! Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on August 18, 2006
    Please say you will finish this story, I just love the plot!!!It is so well written, and a new angle to the SS/HG pairings, you must let us get the rest of the story:-))
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  • From ANON - cheryl2470 on August 14, 2006
    I've been waiting forever to see what happens with this story - it's really fun to read! Are you planning to finish it?
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  • From ANON - Ceridwen on August 13, 2006
    Ok. Obviously you want me to beg. Very well.
    *falls to knees and pleads* PLEEEEEEAAAAASSE! PLEASE! PLEASPLEASPLEASPLEASPLEAS! PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAS!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2006
    finish me! the story cies
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - DarkAria on July 16, 2006
    Please keep going! It's soooooooo good! Update soon...Please...I beg of you!
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  • From ANON - Ceridwen on June 17, 2006
    As AFF is finally up now, I hope you haven
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  • From ANON - treeperson on February 12, 2006
    Mmm, I like this. A lot. Keep it up. :)
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  • From ANON - cheryl2470 on February 11, 2006
    I think this is my favorite fic since "Survival of the Fittest" - love the characterizations! Can't wait until "Sunday" to see what the big day is like! Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - t wrecks on February 10, 2006
    This is actually the first believable setting for this pairing. I think R & H would be doing more to try to sabotage the marriage.
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  • From ANON - lora on February 09, 2006
    this story has a great start. i hope there's more. i really don't have any suggestions, just keep writing :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2006
    Aw can't wait to read more!! Great fic!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2006
    Hi. Good plot. Excellent writing. Please do continue. :D
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