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Reviews for Kiss The Serpent

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  • From ANON - Anguloce on February 06, 2006
    so far i really like how this is progressing! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - anya on February 06, 2006
    How sad that they didn't kiss after that walk...
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  • From ANON - Nyt22 on February 05, 2006
    I just have to say that this is one of the best fics I have read in a while. It's well constructed, the characters are portrayed very well, and it is amazingly interesting. You have an excellent form of writing. I'm eager to see where the next chapter goes. Hopefully, the next chapter will be soon. (hint, hint).
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  • From ANON - Guinnevere on February 05, 2006
    The only thing I can think of is: ...and THEN what happened? Good fic.
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  • From ANON - Starbridge on February 04, 2006
    Arrrggghhh!!!!! Kiss her you dimwit! I think perhaps Hermione needs to have a little talk with him about making memories. :)
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  • From ANON - Briar (yet again not signed in) on February 04, 2006
    Yay!!!! I love this fic but it gets me sad that Severus gets so down on himself... oh well write more quick!
    ~Briar~
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on February 04, 2006
    How adorable! The joining together of two clueless virgins! I'm blown away by the concept, His Royal Yummyness and Princess Perfect have to get married to do the Horizontal Mambo! Yippee I'm so looking forward to this fic developing. The character interaction is bubbling along nicely, and I love the chapter where Albus announces Severus' sexual status to the whole of the Order. Gods I laughed my socks of. My husband thinks that I've lost the plot but I really don't give a damn. The opportunities here for comedy are boundless, I'm especially looking forwards to the wedding night! Hurry and Update soon please? Mail me when it's up? LOL ;o)X
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  • From ANON - Ailo on February 04, 2006
    ANGST! I can't believe he didn't kiss her! Well actually I can, but really, he needs to take some kind of initiative and stop second guessing his sexy sexy self. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope it's up soon!

    ~Ailo
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  • From slygriff21 on February 04, 2006
    Sounds like they are both feeling something for each other and neither knows how to act on it. I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Athena on February 04, 2006
    I love how awkward he is with her. Its so human of him! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Lisbeth on February 04, 2006
    Hey. I'm usually not a fan of Snape/Hermione, but I stumbled across this story and I really like it. So update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Miepje on February 04, 2006
    Argh! He should have just kissed her!
    Although it is good of him to let her "dictate the speed", there should be some forward movement, right? ^^

    Looking forward to more of this story, so update soon, please?!
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  • From ANON - applekissis on February 04, 2006
    Just wanted to tell u I liked this chapter..I like the way the story is going and look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Juli_Min on February 04, 2006
    I have just discovered this story and I must say I really like it. It's a different approach to a much used topic, with Snape being the virgin and not Hermione. Their interactions are very well thought through. You don't make it out to be easy and fast like some others did, you know what I mean? One story I read with a similar plot went somehow like: she had to lose it, he decided to do it for the sake of the order, the first kiss, they fell in love, Voldemort was defeated, eternal bliss. I don't tell you this to discredit the author of that particular story, just to illustrate what I mean. I like the slow building of a story, it's much more realistic.

    And another complement; the way you have Harry interact with Draco is really funny. Harry has the hots for the little ferret, hasn't he? Harry has always been a bit dense in the books, so I guess he needs a kick in the ass to realize it.

    I'll stop now, although I could say a lot more. The story is great and I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Have a pleasant weekend,
    Juli
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on February 04, 2006
    JUST KISS HER DUDE!! He needs to be slapped!! LOL!! Poor Hermione, I can only imagine her frustration!! Great new chapter though!! I can't wait to see what Draco knows or doesn't know. Keep up the great work and please update soon!!

    Alauralen
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