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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2006
    I know your stories are very, very AU and extremely OOC, but aside from that, this has to be the most unbelievable reaction to a physical assault I have ever read in my life. Aside from the fact that he did not want to do it, and she knew that, her initial reaction in the morning after is extraordinary. She may have known he loved her, she may have known he hated the act but a young woman, hell, any woman, would have a major reaction to that assault. And probably would for a long time afterward. Violence is always more mental than physical. Healing physical wounds means nothing. Even magic does not make it go away. After all, she was barely prepared beforehand for it. That would be the one thing that would make a difference, sufficient training beforehand. And it would have to have been training. For a good example of this you could read Ladyofthemasques For Someone Special. She is a brilliant writer and you could, perhaps, get a few tips.
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  • From ANON - Shdwcat27 on February 04, 2006
    No no no. nothing implied. Must have lemons. ha ha ha. VERY intense fic Ms. Figg. Really good, but very intense.
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on February 04, 2006
    Yay! Let Not-so-Little Severus give us a Grand Performance! My Husband is on nightshift at weekends, so I need to live vicariously :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2006
    Ch - 37 - Needs to be lemons and good lemons at that, to trace away the last time they had intercourse with some really yummy memories. Sleep well, we expect a lot out of you!
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  • From ANON - JW on February 04, 2006
    Ch 37 - ack, getting sex advice from Albus! Well, seems to be good advice... I'll be happy with the next chapter, regardless of whether it has lemons. I really want to see how you kill Voldemort, and whether Denise gets a happy ending, and if we'll have baby Snapeys. But lemons would be nice too eventually.
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  • From ANON - chatty on February 04, 2006
    LEMONS LEMONS!!! PLEASE???!! Please write the lemony scene. Nothing can compare to makeup sex!!! severus and Hermione's makeup sex is always awsome and this is one fantastic makeup scene. It even has the potential for it to get emotional since Severus is so put off and guilty etc. And lemons in the next chapter will be very refreshing after the brutal ritual thing. waiting for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on February 04, 2006
    write the actual lemon .. ~grins ~ you know you want to ... please .....later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Lassie on February 04, 2006
    Dear, you're my hero when it comes to writing free lance stories. I love reading and writing in general, and I think your talent is amazing. Especially your speed. I absolutely look forward to reading your stuff because I always know it's good! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - rush22 on February 04, 2006
    ugh! it just keeps getting better and better, not saying that im a fan of the violence or condoning it but you are such a talented writer. the story has become so compelling and i cant wait to read more! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - angel on February 04, 2006
    i hope mione can help him thought this please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - aurora on February 04, 2006
    So well done. . . .and i like the way you had Hermione tell him to stop punishing her, too. You kept her personality very in tact. You've done such wonderful work on the whole story! the actual ritual was well done, too, very detached which is how i imagine they both were though the whole thing potions and whatever else. I'm glad Hermione was all fixed so easily b/c even at the end of that description i couldn't help but curl into myself a little- nicely done.

    Keep up the good work! ~a
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  • From ANON - JW on February 04, 2006
    Ch 36 - yay, Hermione! I'm glad she's starting to slap some sense into him. Heck, she walked willingly in there to take the Mark and to become a spy. Because she has Severus to help her, she's better off than he was when HE became a spy. And she and all her friends will be free when Voldy dies. Deal with it, Severus - snap out of the pity party! (Hmm, maybe he can let Hermione whip him... make him feel better...)
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  • From ANON - JW on February 04, 2006
    Ch 32-35 - does Harry know that Hermione had to go through all "that" because of his not killing Voldemort yet? Sigh.... I'll be looking forward to seeing Voldy die. Now for the healing potions, etc. Perhaps Hermione will now convince Harry to work a lot harder on his Voldy-killing skills. Good job writing, Ms_Figg - these look like they were tough chapters to write!
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  • From ANON - chatty on February 04, 2006
    whew the ritual was err... brutal. but poor severus. i hope he doesnt end up like draco. lol. im sure he wont but just in case. this story is so good. i dont know if you have let out any emotion out of it. its full of everything and its simply great. i hope that sev and hermione repay voldy so much for having hermione to go through that. Voldemort should feel soo bad that he regrets for being such a dirty dark lord. oops. thats soo out of line, lol. waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Koda on February 04, 2006
    Poor Severus, poor Hermione.. but, ugh, it's 1:17 a.m. and I have a French quiz at 9:00.
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