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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - firewall on February 03, 2006
    Ch31-33 - ...the fucker ...not the fuckee...hahahahahaha! Oh my that was too funny. And so Snapish. I dunno if Hermione thought this through. The ritual sound nasty. That potion better be a good one but she'd better be a good actress or they are in for a tough time.
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on February 03, 2006
    Great Chapter... Lord how bad will this be?? Like other of your stories maybe?? I can't wait but yet I am alittle scared for Hermione....
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  • From ANON - Miepje on February 03, 2006
    will HELP Hermione cope (argh(
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  • From ANON - Miepje on February 03, 2006
    Well, Hermione and Severus have some hard times ahead of them. I hope the potion will Hermione cope and that they will be okey together afterwards...
    *phew* Lots to happen. Update soon, please!!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on February 03, 2006
    Oh the anticipation! I feel for Hermione right now! I really do! I'm just glad Voldie let them off as lightly as he has!
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  • From ANON - chatty on February 03, 2006
    voldemort is such a voyeur. eew. and by the way what happened to ur voldmort and his hidden snake story?

    the ritual indeed sounds brutal. im looking forward for the next chapters. i wonder why voldy wants them broken. shouldnt they be proud etc to be deatheaters.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on February 03, 2006
    Oh Hermione that better be one heck of a potion.
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  • From ANON - jin on February 03, 2006
    That was exilent, Snape is perfect. Write more!...please
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  • From ANON - chatty on February 03, 2006
    this is getting good. cant wait for hermione to join the club and beat voldy's ass. lol. some sacrifices have to be made tho on hermiones side atleast she will be taking that potion. i hope there arent a lot of deatheaters around when the act is done. cant wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on February 03, 2006
    Wow! Things are getting pretty heavy. Great story! Can't wait for more.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on February 03, 2006
    Lol, as soon as I read the line 'I'll be back', Severus turned into Arnie... and he suddenly had a gun strapped to his side instead of his wand. Lol! My mind is weird, I know, but still .... I look forward to the next chapter - I'm desperate to know what Voldemort's response is!
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on February 03, 2006
    Oh WOW! I've been away from AFF for a coule of weeks so I've a lot of reading to catch up on and so I've read this amazing work in one go!!! Quite superb Ms Figg as per usual. You really know how to manipulate the characters, mould them to your will and create such stimulating *grins evilly* works of art! I'm so anticipating the next installment of your work. I'm totally obsessed with all your writings and wait with baited breath for you next offerings. You portray a multi-dimensional array of characters, yet at the same time not taking them too far OOC. I especially admire your use of descriptive narrative with the assassins and their untimely demise at the hands of the delicious Severus. Quite a talent he has there wouldn't you say? From now on you must feed your muse well with pepper-up potion and maybe a stamina enhancer to maximise your production of the Lemony goodness that you are famous for!

    LOL your fan Amethystique! ;o)X
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  • From ANON - lilly on February 03, 2006
    I love your stories. Please continue. I can not wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on February 03, 2006
    I have noticed in quite a few of your stories, as in this chapter, where you do not use the title of Madam for the school healer/nurse. It sounds very disrespectful.

    Students and especially the headmaster in speaking to students would definitely refer to her as MADAM Pomfrey and not simply use her last name. If the person speaking to Madam Pomfrey had a closer relationship with her and there were no students around, they would call her Poppy.

    "Madam" seems to be the 'title' of non-professorial women ... Hooch, Pince, Pomfrey.
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on February 03, 2006
    Whooo! Is it hot in here or is it just your writing?????
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