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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Denise on February 01, 2006
    well, i really like the way the story is going. a very strong plot. But wow....severus can get pretty gross at times! Plea continue this tory through their first child...that would be great.
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  • From ANON - angel on February 01, 2006
    man i kind of feel sorry for them ... please please update soon later for now

    angel
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  • From slygriff21 on February 01, 2006
    Damn! Severus is P-I-S-S-E-D O-F-F! Go Severus! Beat them like a read headed step child! They deserve it! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From Ms_Figg on February 01, 2006
    Anon: Warning added to Chapter 28 and I will add a violence warning to the details later. But I can't put warnings on every chapter that gets q little squicky, simply because not everyone will be squicked. For example, Chapter 28 didn't bother me because he wasn't actually doing it, just talking about it. The story is rated NC-17 which covers a wide variety of ills other than sex. But thanks for the review. :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on February 01, 2006
    JTBJAB: Hey. The ring wands won't necessarily make anyone stronger, they would just be more convenient. Folks are forever tucking wands here and there, not knowing where to put them, setting them down and not remembering where they put them etc.(I imagine lol) I seriously doubt Voldemort would get one at any rate. But who knows. Thanks for reviewing.
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  • From ANON - pokerfan on February 01, 2006
    ewwww...peeled bananas...oohh not the image I wanted when i go to bed tonight.....they should not have pissed off snape...oh boy!
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  • From ANON - anon on February 01, 2006
    umm, maybe you should consider a warning some of these chapters have made me feel quite sick, esspecically the last chapter with snape's talking alone. uehhh... but i still really enjoy your fic
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  • From ANON - cat on February 01, 2006
    I like your story so far but it has recently taken an extremely violent turn, i even felt a bit of bile rise in this last bit of the chapter, really i did. wow. but nevertheless i really love your stories anyways this one particularly good job
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  • From ANON - droxy on February 01, 2006
    Oh vigilante Severus!! Hmm what is going to happen to Draco now! i so love evil Malfoys and your villians are deliciously evil in the worst way.

    Wayne and Dewyne reminded me of a less funny This is Darryl and my other brother Darryl
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on February 01, 2006
    Did I say in the last chapter that Hermione shouldn't market her ring wands? Cause if I didn't... I meant to... cause Moldie Voldie does not need to be stronger... but perhaps the solicitor could patent it (i think that's the phrase) so nobody else legally can market ring wands *shrug* but then I don't know what plans you have, so continue on .... and I think it's amusing that Severus enjoys making banana splits, lol!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on February 01, 2006
    The last part of that chapter... I was shivering.... However, they should have known not to tangle with Severus.... Well, I guess they know now... not that that will help them. I never want to be on his bad side... but seeing all the lengths he will go to for one he cares about..... nice.
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  • From ANON - LadySnape on February 01, 2006
    I have read nearly every fiction you have published here on Adultfanfiction, and probably should have reviewed before...sorry about that. I wanted to tell you that you are a phenomenal writer, the way you weave each one of your stories is amazing in the versatility alone. You manage to take key character elements and alter them enough to make them not only believable but also different from your last story. This last chapter you have added gave me chills, brava on eliciting yet again an emotional response from a reader. I thank whatever it is that inspires you as you have an incredible talent for the written word.
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  • From ANON - AngelEyez on February 01, 2006
    wow...this story has taken many dark, but wonderful turns. i can't wait to see them being castrated. that'll be priceless if Malfoy finds them like that. haha. i can see it now. can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on February 01, 2006
    holy shit..it just keeps getting better and better...wow...go sev go...i so love this story...holy shit...and way to go hermione and the ring wand...what an ingenious idea figg...you are da bomb...keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - Ithilin Palandiriel on February 01, 2006
    OOOOOOOk! Remind me NOT to get on his bad side. EEEEK!!!!!

    Ithilin
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