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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on January 29, 2006
    Bobbi: Thank you for pointing that out. Big error. Going to take some work to fix too. I'll finish, then find a way to fix it without losing too much. How about a wedding present? Yeah! Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Lilith. on January 29, 2006
    And I only just now skimmed the comments and noticed that you addressed that already. So I'm sorry (and I feel kind of silly, heh), you DO know.

    Anyway. I looooove this story.
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  • From ANON - Lilith. on January 29, 2006
    You will update. Now. Do it.

    C'mon, please? *Sighs*

    I love how un-cliched this is. Very refreshing.

    Although, since I nit-pick, this has been eating me alive: "Erin" is a girl's name. "Aaron" is a boys name. But hey, you might already know that. Those crazy wizards and their silly names. It just kept biting my ass every time I read about him.
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  • From ANON - Bobbi on January 29, 2006
    There was a little continuity error. He told her he wanted to sleep with her and gave her the book the night before her birthday, but then they hung out and got close for like, weeks, then she got attacked shortly before her birthday and wound up spending it in the infirmary. Other than that it's really good. Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - JW on January 29, 2006
    Ch 15 - so Severus knows that Lucius imitated Ginny's voice, too? And the whole Narcissa revenge thing.... hmm, I hope Cissa doesn't come after Severus! Insecure Hermione couldn't take that. And he needs those two weeks to recover, if she needed four days to reciver from just a few minutes with Lucius. I'm glad Albus isn't interfering. I wonder if Hermione will just let the month deadline pass without telling Severus he can choose to have an annulment... trap him into staying with her! And thank YOU for sharing your creative talents with us, Ms_Figg!!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 29, 2006
    Great update! I can't wait till he's out of the Hospital wing and we can get to some lemon pie! Update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Cathleen on January 29, 2006
    God bless your lusty little heart! OK, now let's get to the lemons!!!! Wonderful story...
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on January 29, 2006
    Love it!
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on January 29, 2006
    omfg...i love it...woohoo...great chapter..i love them snuggling at the end...i hope they miss the deadline for annuling the marriage...they cannot annul it...omg ...please next update...keep up the great work...
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  • From ANON - chatty on January 28, 2006
    well, everything's coming back to normal now and Snape's healing very faast. :) only lemons ahead. hehe.
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  • From ANON - pokerfan on January 28, 2006
    bedtime I mean...it is way past mine....
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  • From ANON - pokerfan on January 28, 2006
    Ahhhh Ms. Figg ---another awesome story. Couldn't let it pass without reviewing.....Please send some lemons my way before bedtome....PRETTY PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on January 28, 2006
    ah Ms_Figg, that lusty lil heart of yours makes a lot of people (myself most definitely included) very happy.
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on January 28, 2006
    So, glad he is back and they are heating up. Looking forward to the lemons and rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - droxy on January 28, 2006
    more more more!!! I think I love the chapters where they expose their hearts :)
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