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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Statues on January 28, 2006
    Ooooooh! *Insert the insufferably high squeeling and poor spelling of myself* I love your work so much; it makes Uni fly by, honestly! I can't wait for your next update and next fic! You are a stunning person Mrs Figgs. Your obt. fan, Statues.
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  • From ANON - Denise on January 28, 2006
    chp 2-15: well, i really LOVE what you are doing with the story! i really do.....the MLC is my favorite plot line....and with ur writing expertise.....lets just say that even hormones aren't making me cranky!!! i especially like the last chp (15)..it is just soo sweet.....and explained a lot. I am glad that you are still moving it relativley slow....and haven't made severus admit to anyone....not even himself that he is in love. I am not sure how far you want to go with this story, but maybe after this...maybe u could write one where hermione is pregnant with severus's child. It would be intersting to see how he copes with hermione's hormone problems.....well just a thought. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 28, 2006
    Ch 15 - Now now, don't have him mend too quickly...gotta let the passion grow. She really needs to be ready for him...mindless in passion. *rubs hands together* I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - falconfamiliar on January 28, 2006
    wooohooo you rubbed out another great chapter. I would love to see someone
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 28, 2006
    now i can say i want a man like snape, hell yeah but now it seems she will stay with him, from the sounds of it.* thinks about the lemons*
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  • From ANON - K on January 28, 2006
    i wonder, will sevvie find out about the marriage law being repealed BEFORE or AFTER he and hermione have sex?
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  • From ANON - Mchell on January 28, 2006
    Severus doesn't know that the Law no longer exists, does he?
    Good chapter!
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  • From Tigerrr on January 28, 2006
    SO glad our Sev is back and still raring to rut even when he's half dead, lol. One one hand I'm glad he avenged Hermione, but whenever I think of Lucius, I think of Jason Isaacs with that blonde wig and think, "he's to beautiful to die!" Yeah, it's crazy, I know! lol. Good work though - I always enjoy the thought of two gorgeous men fighting, kinda like how men enjoy watching mud wrestling....!

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  • From ANON - Edania on January 28, 2006
    Thats my man! Yeah go bby no can break him, and he still got to fuck herm, , yet i wonder what will happen after that? will they stay together or will he just fuck and leave? Update now!
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  • From ANON - Evelynn on January 28, 2006
    YEAH! Severus is alive! Can't wait for the next update! Joyfulness!
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 28, 2006
    Ch 12-14 Well, darn...I was looking forward to next chapter at the end of the chapter and it wasn't there. I can't say I'm sorry to say good-bye to Lucius...he was a real beast. But I would really like to say adios to Voldemort. Talk about evil. Poor Severus, that was one terrible beating.

    Carry on, Ms Figg, you are an incredible teller of tales.
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  • From ANON - BeckiSoup on January 28, 2006
    Mrs. Figg, you are amazing. I hardly ever leave reviews(i know, shame on me) but its past time i left one for you. i always enjoy your hermione/sev stories. everytime i log on, i see a new chapter, or a new story to read and love. you update so promptly, and its quality, with twists, turns, and awesomeness. i love your stories and i love you! thank you for being so wonderful!
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 28, 2006
    How many days was he abused??? I'm glad that Herm. is falling in love with him. What she said to the Griffindors was priceless!!! Trust Ron to screw things up. How is Harry feeling about all of this??? How is Voldy going to treat a deatheater who honors his wife more than his pledge as a deatheater? Enquiring minds want to know! Well, we also want smut, too.
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  • From ANON - droxy on January 28, 2006
    what willbe interesting is if they do dissolve the nuptials and will Snape really want to keep her once he's had her.
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  • From ANON - kris on January 28, 2006
    This is a great story! I have not been disappointed in any of your fics thus far, you have got a way with purple prose! I often find myself judging other fics by your yardstick! If ever you decide to give Ron the old Chuck Jones classic "Duck Amuck" treatment and transfigure him into something stupid, you have my blessing! Gads the little shit is irritating!
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