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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Joi on January 28, 2006
    Oh heck NO you better not leave it like that for a long period of time! Ha ha, your story is AWESOME. Obviously so if I'm reviewing a mere minute or two after you've posted chapter ten. Well, it only felt like a few minutes to me. PLEASE don't leave me hanging. I'm so bored tonight, your story is keeping me sane! You're an awesome author!

    Joi
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  • From InnaChy on January 28, 2006
    i think i'm becoming addicted to your stories, and you so rock. i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.
    good greif, if chapter 9 turns me into a puddle, i dread to think what's gonna happen when when severus finally catches her (or vise versa). ;)
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  • From ANON - chatty on January 28, 2006
    yay. the story is taking a new turn now. Cant wait for the pursuit to go on.
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  • From ANON - sevsmione on January 28, 2006
    Will they fall in love or it's just his lust and plotting that would bring good result for him ! can't wait for the next ones!
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  • From ANON - Miepje on January 27, 2006
    Gods; no lemons yet, not even lemonade, but hot as hell already!! (nothing like a good pursuit) I just love a Severus that stakes his claim ^^ I can just see him sitting, staring into the fire, plotting.
    Well, Hermione is warned.

    Patiently *snort* awaiting the next chapter

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  • From ANON - Hypatia on January 27, 2006
    Ooohhh...I don't know. Sev here's awfully mean and controlling...Not sure he's worthy of Hermione. He's gonna have to redeem himself a bit more....lest your faithful readers think that Luscious Lucius isn't more worthy of Hermione's holy lovin'!!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 27, 2006
    Uh oh! Hermione's not going to know what hit her is she? At least Severus told her his intentions before hand. I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 27, 2006
    awww so cute, he could be bastard but he at least he is kind bastard, can't think of anything better.
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  • From ANON - Genvieve on January 27, 2006
    I'm reading along... going this is surprisingly good... then I glance at the author's name.
    Ms Figg.
    Duh, of course it's going to be good if Ms Figg is writing it.
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  • From ANON - sweetdreams123@hotmail.com on January 27, 2006
    not the way i imagined severus would be when he found out he'd been lied to. i thought he'd first sit there with his mouth open, then start yelling! i didn't think he'd tell her his intentions though. maybe just offer to show her the different forms of petting. i like severus jealous!
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  • From ANON - droxy on January 27, 2006
    Oh dear, she doesnt have a chance in hell does she ;>
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  • From ANON - JW on January 27, 2006
    Ch 9 - go, Severus!! Can't wait to see what he does to keep boys away from her. Hey, is Raucous in this fic? He can always eat some of the skinnier boys..... heh-heh!
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  • From ANON - K on January 27, 2006
    yummy, i wonder if ginny will hook up with lucius in the future?
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 27, 2006
    I was also curious about the over the top way that Snape reacted with Catherine. He really was rather viscious and I was surprised to see the violence he displayed towards her. I guess I just thought e'd react with more finesse. Likewise, to his little temper tantrum with his furniture pillows. Give it a rest, Sevie-poo.
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 27, 2006
    Ch 6-8 Well, talk about misconceptions!! Hermione is really lucky she talked to Ginny and that Ginny is so mature and well-verse in the male psyche. Hermione's eventual lemons with Snape have the potential to be either incredibly frightening or mindblowing to the young virgin.

    Oh yeah, Lucious Lucius is amazingly sexy, at least based on the portrayal in the movies, but talk about nasty. I'm afraid even Ginny would be out of her depth here.

    I wonder where they are going to go next? Will Snape believe her confessions? Will he initiate her gently or with his usual gusto? Will he slow down and set a more leisurely pace or will his lust get the best of him? Ah, questions, questions, questions. Now, Ms Figg, I'll await the answers.
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