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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - DawnEB on January 27, 2006
    I liked this chapter, it points nicely to things to come. Just a friendly hint for future reference, a girl can legally consent to sex at 16 here in the UK, and Hermione would also be a consenting Adult at 17 in the Wiozarding world. 18 is the general age of majority, so she wouldn't be able to marry in the Muggle world without her parent's consent, even if she'd been shagging a man legally for a couple of years by then. Then again, your stories are so wonderfully AU anyway :)
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  • From ANON - droxy on January 27, 2006
    oh wow, such a twist. I love your Ginny.
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  • From ANON - Pastel on January 27, 2006
    Nice chapter. It's great.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on January 27, 2006
    Just when everything's "copasetic"...(to borrow a term from a previous boyfriend who thought I was a little too randy for his needs)...

    ...You see fit to turn Severus into a crazed husband.....jealous with lust!!!

    I'm down with that...as long as he respects Hermione. Tis a huge order to fill...given his past experience and reaction to women. So far, he's an ugly, old brute.


    Ms. Figg... You've got your work cut out for you here!!
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  • From ANON - lao80 on January 27, 2006
    Love it! I think Mione and Ginny should have a b-day sleep over and Sev can get all sorts of the wrong ideas about the two by listening in.
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  • From ANON - applekissis on January 27, 2006
    COOL STORY..I REALLY LIKE IT...MORE SOON I HOPE
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on January 27, 2006
    Yes! The road to the orchards is getting built, it's gonna be great. I agree with a previous reviewer (can't remember their name) ... it would be great if, because of his emerging desire for Hermione, his other sexual experiences are total crap! Serve him right, lol.
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  • From ANON - Evelynn on January 27, 2006
    Great job so far! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - casey on January 27, 2006
    another great fic. but then again if it says author: Ms_Figg its sure to be very entertaining! good job.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on January 27, 2006
    Delightful as always, Ms Figg!!! I luv the tension between these two characters. It always leads to some really hot luvin'! Update soon, por favor!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs,
    Killer K
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  • From NubileCeleste on January 27, 2006
    I love it! Very very good. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Moyra on January 27, 2006
    chap 7 & 8: The intermezzo with Lucius was rather helpful, and I was glad that Severus didn
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  • From ANON - JW on January 27, 2006
    Ch 7-8 - Ooh, Hermione's going to regret that "Perhaps, Lord Malfoy" she said.... Good thing Severus heard it. Now I just hope Severus doesn't give Hermione this book and say that it was Lucius' gift! And YAY for Ginny!!!! Yeah, growing up with six brothers must've taught her about guys, and I'm very glad she is able to see things clearly. Well, except for Lucius - she probably doesn't know that Lucius likes to cause pain, enough to scare off even Death Eater wives. Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - EVIL MJ on January 27, 2006
    All I can say is more
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  • From slygriff21 on January 27, 2006
    Why is he wrapping the book? Is he going to give it to Hermione? I can't wait to find out what she tells him! Update again and soon! I can't wait to read more!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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