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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Remetan on January 27, 2006
    Oh, trigger hair Severus, how interesting...This is looking a little darker than what I am familiar with you doing. But interesting none the less. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Edania on January 27, 2006
    oh damn ( yes i say that often) he is good when he is mad and i can say thats how he is. I think i love the idea from this story, its kinda real in a way unlike some stories are just kinda unreal.
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on January 26, 2006
    great chapter...i like the fact that sev is having these thoughts...i really want to see hermione and him flirting with each other...i hate the fact that you will be writing about other girls...but oh well...anyway..keep up the good work...i hope catherine is out of the way now...woohoo..
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  • From tiddlywinks on January 26, 2006
    I'm always impressed by the sheer volume of what you write - you've always got something on the boil! I'm glad you decided to tackle the wedding law challenge... can't wait to see what happens next :D
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 26, 2006
    Hermioneandseverusfan: Honey, listen. Implied means just that. Suggestive. Not blatant. Let your mind take it where you want. But I am going to be honest here, you piss me off and I'll put Severus in the middle of an orgy just for you. :::eg::: lol just kidding. maybe. But seriously, if the story upsets you that much, please don't read it. I'm not going to change it because you don't like where its going. It's nothing personal. It's just my story. ok?
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  • From ANON - angel on January 26, 2006
    hmm maybe hi should talk to his new wife and find out the truth ...then he will know for sure what did that night .... please please please update soon i would love to read what is going to happen next

    angel
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  • From ANON - JW on January 26, 2006
    Ch 4-5 - uh-oh, all those boys wanting to shag/snog "Mrs. Snape" - but not because she's Hermione. I hope she sees that. Perhaps he should inspect her wardrobe and keep her wedding dress and sexier stuff in his wardrobe, just for appearance, of course (heh!). So, he'll have Death Eater visitors? Interesting.... I wonder what those conversations will be like. And now she's told everyone they have an "open marriage" - news that will get back to Voldemort somehow. VERY interesting!! Write, Figgy, write!!!
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  • From ANON - hermioneandseverusfan on January 26, 2006
    when you mean implied are you just saying that he well take his lovers in his room and that will be it or that he will go to a inn with them and get room and come home smelling like sex. can you tell how you are going to implied that
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  • From ANON - sweetdreams123@hotmail.com on January 26, 2006
    drool, drool, drool. great plot! had to review to see what all the fighting was about!
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  • From ANON - kitkat on January 26, 2006
    Ms_Figg goes MLC... it had to happen! Well I like this one already. Severus actually has a life, and Hermione doesn't seem to be the whimpy little brat half of the MLC's had her as. Loved the wedding, can't wait to read about the wedding night date!
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on January 26, 2006
    With all the varying story dealing with MLC, yours is a nice change with the marriage starting out being open. Oh, poor Snape not getting it up until he was by himself. Hermione is such a heartbreaker.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 26, 2006
    I smell trouble with a capital S or SS.

    It is going to be interesting to see if this is just about sex or will you have them fall in love?


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  • From ANON - kris on January 26, 2006
    Great story! Can't wait for more! You haven't disappointed me yet!
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on January 26, 2006
    It's great that Hermione is realizing her options and not limiting herself to her sexy husband. But should she really rule out other deatheaters such as Malfoy?
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  • From ANON - Denise on January 26, 2006
    chp 2-4: GOD!! Life is soooo busy. waiting for an update on you story is one of the few things that is keping me going! i like the story so far. It ia amazing to see what my favorite author does with my favorite plot-line. so far...i like it. it is actually very diff from the rest. in the other ones....snape and hermione get married.....they have sex on their wedding night....they both love it....and then they hav emore sex...and fall in love...im glad uve changed up the plot a bit. well cant wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
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