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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JW on February 04, 2006
    Ch 38 - whoa, THAT was the start of a lemon? Boy, these characters sure know how to override the poor author... I'm glad they had the little talk, but Hermione seems to need the makeup sex too, to counter what happened at Voldy's. Severus needed to know her frustration at going through eveything these past four years and then to end up with LESS husband than she started with. Makeup sex, makeup sex now!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2006
    Ch 38 - Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - k on February 04, 2006
    stupid severus, love it, write the actual lemon.
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  • From ANON - AFF fan on February 04, 2006
    Yeah you should write the lemons...how about some lemonade, lemon pie, lemon ice cream, lemon coughdrops....haha if your getting the idea...;)
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on February 04, 2006
    Oh please make it a lemon! Please, A little tender passionate loving for Severus so he can show himself he won't hurt her.

    I won't lie, the ritual did make me uneasy but it was there for a reason. I did think you might loose me there but you are such a fantastic author I can't seem to leave these stories alone. I have faith in your writing and know somehow that those parts that make me uneasy will make the story that much more of a masterpiece in the end....does that make sense? I know what I mean but can't seem to write it today. Its one of those backward days.


    Well anyway my dear. You still have me eagerly awaiting your next update. Keep up the amazing work.

    I hope Hermione and Severus Kick moldy's arse! lol
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  • From slygriff21 on February 04, 2006
    Sneaky Hermione! Very sneaky! I can't wait to read the lemons! Update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on February 04, 2006
    OO! A lemon! You have to have one!
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  • From ANON - Juli_Min on February 04, 2006
    Oh, Hermione is ruthless. But Severus needs to get over his guilt. The lemons can be implied, I don't mind. I'm reading your stories for the plot not only the sex.

    Ps. Congratulation on getting nominated at Multifaceted (three times if I counted correctly). I will vote for you. ^__^


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  • From ANON - Denise on February 04, 2006
    chp 37: You should definatley write the lemons. nad hten you should add some of their thoughts maybe...this is an importnatn turn in the story, becaue it is the first time they have sex after severus brutalized her...so we need to know how it is.....cant wait to see what you decide to do. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - luna luck on February 04, 2006
    LEMONS please!!!!!! You know there has to be explosive sex after all that.
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on February 04, 2006
    Oh you better write that out!! I mean hell you went through all the trouble to set it up and pull us into reading it you better damn well deliver!!!! Not that I don't have faith in your writing but how can you ask us a question like that?? Do we want you to continue with that scene?? Well I don't know about everyone else but I do damn it!! Great chapter one of my favorites in the story!!!
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  • From ANON - Denise on February 04, 2006
    well....it has been a while since i have reviewed....but damn!! that chapter about hermione being raped...well im not usually squemish..but wow.....it was well written, but who ever knew that severus was sooo mean....that chapter gave me a cold feeling......i wouldnt let my husband come near me for 2 hours....lol. i also wanted to congratulate you, not many people could have written a chapter like that. It is really amazing how you can write really sexy and hot scenes and hen you can write these really explicit and dark sex scenes...now that is talent.
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  • From ANON - luna luck on February 04, 2006
    LEMONS please!!!!!! You know there has to be explosive sex after all that.
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  • From ANON - WickedlyWanton on February 04, 2006
    You know, I was beginning to wonder if you ever slept! I am online almost 24/7 myself and every time I look you have a new chapter or two up. And I look for them quite often. I would think that a lemon would be good here, as not only to take the bad memory away from Severus, but also for your readers. Remember, the last we saw of Severus and Hermione together like that he was brutal. A little lovin' would not go amiss, I should think. By the way, I don't think that I have ever reviewed one of your fics before, and it is a complete oversight on my part. I am such a bad reader and fellow author. I do have to say that I very much like your stories and am very much impressed with your stamina for writing, lol. You are doing so well and I can't wait for your next chapter(s).
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  • From ANON - larissa on February 04, 2006
    i meant out of *whack*,lol. sorry
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