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Reviews for Disharmony in the Dungeons

By : Ms_Figg

From ANON - larissa on February 04, 2006
i love all your stories, and this one is no exception...but i have my reservations. i mean, i understand how she would be understanding about what he did...she did give him permission and knew what she was getting into. However, the next day she barely has any reservations. he's right...the potion is supposed to fix physical not emotional wounds. and i find it hard to believe that any woman could go through that and not have any emotional wounds. even if it felt like just a dream...that's a dream that would give most people pause! also, severus's issues are understandable and i just don't think they should be trivialized(apologies for spelling) by hermione with a simple lust potion. rape, even with permission is something i would think he would need lots of time(more than a week) and conversation *not just sex!* to deal with. anyways, im not trying to be a bitch....I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY...i just think the psychology is out of what.
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From ANON - misty676 on February 04, 2006
what are you kidding me of course you have to right it update soon
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From ANON - Darque Hart on February 04, 2006
Ch 37 -- What do you mean you're going to bed? Here I thought you sat up 34/7 and typed, smoke pouring off the keyboard! You MUST write the lemons! You Must. You Must! I do not have lust potion to give my wizard and drooling over Sev and Mione is often the most excitement I get. I NEED THIS! So, yes, write the lemons. [I know, TMI.]
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From ANON - Ms_Figg on February 04, 2006
Anon: The assault was indeed brutal, and the believability issue you've brought up is addressed in this conversation from the chapter "Coming to Terms"

"I healed you physically, Hermione, but how about emotionally? The elixir doesn
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From ANON - droxy on February 04, 2006
write the lemon!! AFF is having troubles and I fially got a review window!!! It is intersting seeing a remorseful severus, hopefully he can transmute that feeling into revenge
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From ANON - Laura on February 04, 2006
As if we wouldn't want to read this lemon!! Please, bring it on!

I loved the ritual- it was as dark, creepy and violent as I believe Voldemort would want it. Thank goodness Severus had that elixr.

This story is really wonderful- can't wait to read more, more more!

Laura
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From ANON - Miepje on February 04, 2006
I'm glad Hermione got through the horrible ritual without permanent damage, but I feel bad for Severus. The guilt is very understandable, if a bit new for him. He really doesn't know how to deal with it, but luckily Hermione does ^^

Update soon, and with some lovely lemons, please!!
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From ANON - Ladytalon on February 04, 2006
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From ANON - firewall on February 04, 2006
Ch 38 - I re-read my other posts and it seems I did think of poor Sevvie and the impact of the ritual on his psyche. I gues I'm not as mean as I thought I was. *grin* Hermione definitely has a touch of Slytherin in her. I like it. Hmmhmmhmmhmmhmm. Well now, Ms Figg, I think with that potion it's going to be an every oriface encounter. Don't you?
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From goddessnape on February 04, 2006
OMG!! you are so sneaky! *lol* And I can't believe that you're seriously asking that question! A BIG FAT LEMON! (*shakes head at her thought of being only implied*)
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From ANON - Severusism on February 04, 2006
Us? Lusty? You don't say... ;) . Full lemon please...
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From ANON - Koda on February 04, 2006
Eh, either way works for me. I'd rather of had Severus do her without the effects of the potion, but.. that would have taken awhile, wouldn't it? But maybe it would have been worth the wait..

Not complaining, of course. You're the worshipfulgoddessauthorcreature, not me.
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From ANON - firewall on February 04, 2006
Chapter 36 - I was very narrowminded. I had only thought of Hermione and had given Severus no thought whatsoever. I never thought that he would feel so strongly about brutalizing her. I read how he removed himself from the act but didn't give it any thought. Hmmm, his love is deep. Nicely developed Ms Figg.
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From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2006
LEMON!!!! puhleeze!
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From ANON - septentrion on February 04, 2006
ch 37 : what, you could just imply a lemon and not write it ? what are you thinking ? Of course I want the whole lemon !
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