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Reviews for Mates

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - Ameera on January 26, 2006
    I'm really enjoying your story. Two things though. One: Harry's reaction to Sirus and James coming back was a bit flat. Still good though. Two: The ending of each minni section seems a bit weak. You should expand some of them to a few more sentences. Describe something, you know what I mean? I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - MyFictionalAnnihilation on January 26, 2006
    I think I am addicted to everything you write, so said by this direct quote in an email to my friend "Leozodiac is my hero, everything I read and am like wow this was good who
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  • From ANON - britt on January 26, 2006
    That was great I love it.There not enough stories with that pairing they are so good togehter
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  • From ANON - some chick on January 26, 2006
    i like the plot, sorta. and i like the mate idea, but honestly harry gets raped and has a baby named brook just cos? james got married to lily but really was mated to sirius and some how comes back from the dead? eh. and it was very rushed. i think you should finish writing it then come back to it and rework the entire thing. it seems very newbie-ish and it seems like you have a lot of ideas in your head, good ideas, but are unsure how to sort them out. keep working at it. it gets better.
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  • From ANON - dragonclaw21974 on January 26, 2006
    Really good start. I like it alot. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - jw on January 26, 2006
    great story i hope to read more soon
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  • From ANON - sethian on January 26, 2006
    Interesting !!!
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 26, 2006
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - Hambares on January 26, 2006
    OMG! Great start! I can't wait to see how Remus and Snape find out and how they fit into all of this!
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