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Reviews for Betraying Innocence

By : sevsb1tch
  • From Persy on June 21, 2021

    Good job!!!!


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 19, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 03, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - zeezeelabouf on February 07, 2006
    doesn't seem at all like hermione or snape.
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  • From ANON - Lasciviousness on February 05, 2006
    I was totally mad because it seemed like another glorified rape!! But then I got to the end and was like .. "OHHHH..."
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  • From MissSnape on January 30, 2006
    I would love to be Hermione in that situation! (Fantisy with Snape!) It was brill!
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on January 29, 2006
    V. v. nice....I wouldn't mind a bit of role play meself (as long as it IS play) I was a bit hesitant when I read it was sgstd. rape but so glad when they turned out to be trying out fantasies...that way I couldn't feel bad about liking it, lol. Now you have to have them trying out something else...hermione as harem girl, perhaps? ;) nice one.
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  • From ANON - Statues on January 29, 2006
    The dialogue of the characters were clearly out of character, the story far too short and stilted for any sense of depth or personalisation, yet despite not liking the story, I have to say that as a writer you do have potential. I like your style, it's just not particularly suited to a Hermione/Snape fic. With closer study of the nature of the characters, I think you could create a fantastic story, one shot or longer. I hope you persevere and take this as constructive crit, not a flame.
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on January 29, 2006
    Bravo! That was fantastic.. and yes.. it is a common fantasy. Very hot when only a fantasy.
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  • From ANON - Sylvyr on January 29, 2006
    whoever said it was good is either stupid or taking pity on you. it was boring and way too short and they were too OOC for it to be really enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - JW on January 29, 2006
    Phew, what a relief! I'm glad they both enjoyed this. Wonder what their next fantasies will be.... thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on January 29, 2006
    WOW, you are an amazing writer.
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  • From slygriff21 on January 29, 2006
    Great one shot! I love stories like this where the two play out fantacies! Awesome story!

    Tiffany
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