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Reviews for Midnight Stroll

By : Yaoiluver
  • From ANON - Draeconin on January 31, 2006
    I agree that the first chapter left too many questions to be complete in itself. But you have a lot to learn. I do think you should continue writing if you enjoy it, but please study the works of the authors you most like to read and try to learn from them. Your story line was simplistic, the characters unbelievable, and the dialogue... If I were to guess, I'd say this was written by a 13 or 14 year old - 15 tops. There were portions that showed promise, though, so keep trying. Just try to put a little more thought into your characters instead of being carried away by the romanticism.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 31, 2006
    Awww! Chapter 8 please! Harry was scared that Draco had left him. I'm glad Draco got back in time. A huge misunderstanding could have happened instead.
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  • From ANON - Nightwing on January 31, 2006
    Great chapter.... really good!
    Can't wait for more
    chow for now!
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  • From ANON - Yana on January 31, 2006
    that was so sweet
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  • From ANON - Drew on January 31, 2006
    I like the story please cont.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 31, 2006
    Well done! That was very hot- I liked how Draco decided that he wanted everyone to hear Harry's screams.

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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 31, 2006
    Aww! They love each other! I can't wait for chapter 7! More please!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 30, 2006
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 30, 2006
    cute little story. :-) But actually I loved the idea you had with the first chapter and just keeping it a one shot. That would have had me wondering for weeks what happend and come up with multiple scenarios, just to go back and read it again. lol
    but then I*m probably just the self torture kind ;-) keep writing

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  • From ANON - Freak on January 30, 2006
    Hey if they have a problem with it who cars. Draco and Harry kissing is HOT!
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  • From ANON - Meg on January 30, 2006
    So I read the summery and I thought, why not give this a try, I
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  • From ANON - anne on January 30, 2006

    Hey there :) i really like chapter 4 and especially the ending of it, very sweet! hope you'll update soon and hopefully some hot harry/draco action :P


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  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on January 30, 2006
    I really like this story :D
    And I love the fact that you're updating so quickly!
    keep it up! Cant WAIT to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 30, 2006
    Well done! I'm glad Ron & Hermione got what they deserved!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 30, 2006
    Why so secretive? What are they going to tell them? Ron and Hermione told the Gryffindors that? And Ginny went along with it? Was the whole Weasley family in on it? What about the twins? Harry helped them start their store. Were they using him too? Draco beat up Ron! Hahahaha! Can't wait for chapter 4! Too wonderful!
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