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Reviews for Mind Trap

By : serpentlady
  • From ANON - LuciusDrache on January 31, 2006
    I do like where this plot could be headed, i has been a good read for the first 2 chapters i do hope you will contine.
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  • From ANON - alix on January 31, 2006
    Sounds intersting but couldn't Harry have used say a rat or some other rodent to do his testing on? I suppose since he will be working with humans he needs a human to practice just don't hurt Jason too much. keep writing this story shows promise
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  • From ANON - PJ on January 30, 2006
    This sounds very interesting I like the idea of the library. Please continue this story
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 30, 2006
    Looks like this will be a dark Harry story. So far, it's an interesting premis. I do wonder why Dumbledore felt the need to imprision Harry; did he know he was a horcrux?
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  • From ANON - jw on January 30, 2006
    great story update soon
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  • From ANON - Purebloodgodess on January 30, 2006
    I really like your story and think it is a very good idea. I hope that you write more of it.
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on January 30, 2006
    Thisss isss an interesssting concept, I'm really interesssted in it ssso pleassse continue.
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  • From ANON - @@@ on January 30, 2006
    please no slash
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  • From ANON - # on January 30, 2006
    seems like a very good start, be careful to make it take a while before harry becomes super strong
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  • From ANON - LMC on January 30, 2006
    I like this story. What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Emma on January 30, 2006
    I think your story has promise. I can't wait to see how this new Harry is going to act, and how the wizarding world is going to react. I have noticed a few spelling mistakes, but they really don't distract from the story. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - FlameFlameYeah on January 30, 2006
    Seems to be starting out to be a super harry story, but of a style I haven't seen very often, of a darker Harry Potter. I would like to see more of your writing, as long as this story isn't complete slash. Harry turning dark I could understand, but not completely dumping Ron or Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Random Person 32 on January 30, 2006
    a pretty well written chapter.

    this fic has the potential to be very good. so please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on January 30, 2006
    Very cool idea, and so far from what can see of the writing, it matches with the idea. Basically meaning good idea and good writing. I hope that you do plan to continue this story because it would be a shame for you not to. Do you have any pairings in mind, or is the story not going to have any romance? I usually only read slash stories but I'd think I'd still read this one even if it was het because I really find it to be truly good. Update soon please:)
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on January 30, 2006
    Very interesting, indeed. And Tom the barkeep knew of this Library? Sixty years is a long time. Certainly Dumbledore was much older than that, but that would leave out most of the usual suspects. Tom, Lucius and Severus, for example. I'd be interested in seeing where you're going with this.
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